rate_review Reviews

Well done. An excellent portrayal of both Anakin and Padme's characters, in addition to a hot-as-hell sex scene. Great job.

damn

Ouch. More blisteringly good Pagan smut. I think George should just turn over ownership of Ani to you because no one else can do with him what you can. Love the eye expressions, combining his dark brooding qualities with high impact smut is an irresistable combination.

Feedback? You should ask for a fucking award. That was amazing!!!! Not to be annoying, but you need to really write some more A/P fiction, now that the last movie is out.

where is the prequel chapter to this? A lesson learned?

Well written, I like how you keep them in character and infuse enough substance (for lack of a better word) to maintain both plot and sex.... I like Padme's point of view, you do a a very nice job with detailed characterizations.

Damn, damn, damn, you are the BEST smut writer.

"The voice echoed in my head at the same time his tongue pierced me again and again. The scream that worked its way from me ripped through the stillness of the night, blocking out the sound of the wind through the leaves and even Anakin’s groans as he gulped me down as if I were a fountain in the desert"

Now if that isn't poetry, I don't know what is. Your every word is hot and searing and intense. I love the places your Padme/Anakin obsession takes you. Thanks for sharing with us. Oh and thanks for responding to my previous reviews.

Rather dark, as all your stories are, but enjoyable.

Great

After reading this, I needed a cold shower! You paint a picture of such a dark, naughty Anakin and a naive, tempted Padme. Excellent!!