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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Perfect! Please continue soon. I can't wait to see them deepening their relationship. ;)
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January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Deliciously wicked. Your Jack is sin on legs! Exquisite.
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh! I'm loving it! Please continue soon! What if Jack woke up the next morning...early morning before anyone else was up to find Will sitting looking out the window but not really seeing what he was looking at. When he finally gets his attention the first thing he sees surprises him. Fear, questions, a inner struggle...but they are all suddenly replaced by what he now sees is a false cheer. When he asks what's wrong Will won't answer him.
I dunno that's just what popped into my mind when I read this 2nd chapter. Ok Ja Ne!
I dunno that's just what popped into my mind when I read this 2nd chapter. Ok Ja Ne!
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
... Please tell me that there is more... There HAS to be more! Great story!! ~O>
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August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is good! I'm awaiting for the continuation! your da' bomb!
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August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Um....I can't think of anything witty to say. Good story, very well written. You've got the personalities down pretty well.
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August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This had to have been one of the best. fics. i've. ever. read. ever. period. :D i don't remember the last time i drooled this much... amazing. i love the end of the second chapter. beautiful. :D MORE!
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July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lol that was a very good story, but unfortunetly you kinda left me hanging i want more, savvy? lol keep writing!!!
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July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HEY! Don't stop there! WE need true debauchery, depravity, lots of sodomy! Come on! WOOHOO! Great start.
Earen
Earen
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow... this is really good!
I wasn't sure what to make of it, cuz the summary didn't make much sense to my little brain, but it's Will/Jack slash and I have an addiction so.. here I am!
it's really funny that Jack could climb on Will's back (at least that's how I read it) and Will didn't notice...
I love how you ended it with "That's interesting"
can't wait for more! soon! please!
I wasn't sure what to make of it, cuz the summary didn't make much sense to my little brain, but it's Will/Jack slash and I have an addiction so.. here I am!
it's really funny that Jack could climb on Will's back (at least that's how I read it) and Will didn't notice...
I love how you ended it with "That's interesting"
can't wait for more! soon! please!