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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MOOOOOOOOOORE MORE MORE MORE MORE *dies*
schedule
July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It ends there? ... How can you do that to me?!
*thinks things over* However, I suppose if you continued it might ruin everything. That happens quite often.
I loved (LOVED! I tell you!) the way you portrayed Jack. Doing something underhanded like that just matches his personality perfectly. I would think Jack is a hard character to write, so congrats! If my muse hadn't run away *sniffs* I would have shared him with you.
(!! My computer just scared me really bad...It made a really loud noise just 'cause I pressed the shift key 5 times...or something. I just about tipped my chair over.)
Will's portrayal (sp?) was purdy smooth too! ^.~ I can picture him being 'lost in thought' so easily...
There are a few gramatical mistakes in there, but I'm too lazy to go back to find 'em.
All in all, you gots yerself a spiffy piece of slashy fanfiction! Good luck to ya with future works.
*thinks things over* However, I suppose if you continued it might ruin everything. That happens quite often.
I loved (LOVED! I tell you!) the way you portrayed Jack. Doing something underhanded like that just matches his personality perfectly. I would think Jack is a hard character to write, so congrats! If my muse hadn't run away *sniffs* I would have shared him with you.
(!! My computer just scared me really bad...It made a really loud noise just 'cause I pressed the shift key 5 times...or something. I just about tipped my chair over.)
Will's portrayal (sp?) was purdy smooth too! ^.~ I can picture him being 'lost in thought' so easily...
There are a few gramatical mistakes in there, but I'm too lazy to go back to find 'em.
All in all, you gots yerself a spiffy piece of slashy fanfiction! Good luck to ya with future works.
schedule
July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A bit complicated wording in the begining, but I'm sure once you write more it will be better.
schedule
July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THERE BETTER BE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!
*growls at author*
It's a great story so far. LOVED the part where Jack finds out Will is NOT eunuch. ^___^ And as the Captain circled Will like a vulture, you had me drooling over my keyboard. PLENTLY of UST! hee, hee. I always loved FieryButClueless!Will and AdvancingAndSexy!Jack. Hoping to see more from you soon!
^_~GN
*who REALLY needs to get ch10 out on her own J/W*
*growls at author*
It's a great story so far. LOVED the part where Jack finds out Will is NOT eunuch. ^___^ And as the Captain circled Will like a vulture, you had me drooling over my keyboard. PLENTLY of UST! hee, hee. I always loved FieryButClueless!Will and AdvancingAndSexy!Jack. Hoping to see more from you soon!
^_~GN
*who REALLY needs to get ch10 out on her own J/W*