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for Forever Is Eternity

by GundamNymph

person Madoushi Clef
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Did anyone ever tell you you have a beautiful writing style? I was hooked. Didn't have a clue what was going on, but I couldn't stop reading. When I got to the explination, I loved it. I love how he just went up to Jack and said, "let's go. To the pearl."So cool. And yeah, they're both horrible romantics.

Just... beautiful. Do we get more?

~Clef
person Alex
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg i loved it!!!! i think this is one of THE BEST fics about jack and will....very original too...i would've never thought of it! write more!!!!!!!!!!!!



Alex
person Raz Gaiale
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow....I never would have thought of the vampire angle. This is aallyally unique idea, and you carried it out really well! I would love to see more of this. (Jack as a hippie....a dishonest, murderous hippie, but a hippie nontheless. I love it! haha!) Please, continue with this! :)
person SandrineBlack
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AH! You posted this here too... well I guess I didint' need to come out of hiding at the yahoo group site. Oh well, it had to happen sometime I guess. Anywho, I /seriously/ love your f I c I can't say it enough. So just take that sentence and like square it a billion times, and that's how I feel. ^_^ Sooo looking forward to more of your work!

Sandrine
person JediGurrl*Achoolazytosignin*
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
............... wow, I don't usually go for future/somewhat OOC Jack/Will stories, but you mentioned L.J. Smith, so I /had/ to read it. And I loved it and I'd love to read more. Loved the mention of the name Ioz, since he's from Pirates of Dark Water, and as I told a friend, "he's like..... a sane and/or straight version of Jack."
person SkyeDragon
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Holy bloody shite! I LOVED IT!!!! Please, please, PLEASE write more. Anything will do...I love vamp fics, and this one with Jack and Will is just too perfect! Excellent job! Keep it up!
person Jane Silver
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If this doesn't get at least a hundred reveiws then I'm going to be hopping mad!
person Aithilin
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... I liked it. An interesting concept and well-written to add to the effect. Well done. Adding the sexiness of vamps to the already sexy pirates ;). Masterful.

-Aithilin
person Amy K. Browne
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!! LOVE IT!!!! MOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!! Darlin, you just combined a couple of my favorite genres!!! And ya just can't miss with the pairing!!! I would love to see more of these!
person leo
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
fantastic story. just... just fantastic! god i love vampire stories. and you added damon and bonnie!!!!! i positvily adore the vampire diaries and never would have though eve even cross it with Potc. but it so worked. pirates and vampires. *sigh* nothing is better.