rate_review Reviews

Probably the best characterisation of slashy!Will I've read. None of this "i thought i loved her, but i dont really", you explained quite beautifully the relationship between Will and Elizabeth as it stands in the slash world of POTC, and justified her reasons for choosing Norrington over William. I also like that Jack was confused, and mostly unresponsive. Again, i'm tired of reading "they kissed and then suddenly realised that they loved each other". There was no push for romance, just simple actions and reactions. Perfect :)

::giggle:: Niice. I like how you portrayed bold!Will and confused! Jack. You made the scene very believable, I thought. ^.^ I only wish that was what happened in the movie (le sigh).

~Cheshire

Ooohh!! Tastey, mate. Very tastey. ^_^ Love your discription, you've got a very active writing style. This is a good thing. ^_^ :trundles off to read more:

OMG...what a kiss...finally you put them together...but that kiss was, whoo, something else...oh, but it was really good! Keep up the great work! I love the way you write!

Dana

Jack you fool! Can't you see that the greates tresure you'll ever get your hands on is called Will Turner! Or is that Kohl runining your sight?