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Absolutely excellent fic! Love the whole reality hitting Will hard with the fact that he really did make the wrong choice even if he's trying to deny it. And Jack always getting what he wants. I don't really need to comment on it.It is unquestionable.Its impossible to deny him anything. So, looking forward to the future chappies and the wonderful slash ahead. Update really soon! PLEEZ! RWD>

*beams happily at the new chapter* Hazzah! Once again I encourage more post-haste. As for your Beta problem, I wish I could help luv, but I'm the worlds worst speller/grammer-type person *grins and holds out a nice (nice-at-one-time) leather captain's hat with a slightly soggy feather* It's a bit wet... had to swipe it off ... err... I mean.. buy it from some -nice- man down at the docks.. yes *nervous laugh* ANYHOO *coughs* Like I said.. more please? Um.. I'll give you rum this time.. and we all know the many wonderful purposes Rum has! *eyebrow waggle* Oh... thought I should mention I likow yow you gave Mr.Brown a bit of a character (mentioned it at least) other than just a drunk.. personally I think he probably cares for Will too!

please, please, please write more soon! i wanna know what happens!

asher- me too! me too!

kari- *looks at asher strangely* ash-kun... you feelin' ok?

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Oo beo be a dear and continue to write this! Don't be afraid to let Jack's dommish side come out, either. Nobody really wants to see him with Elizabeth. I can't wait for your next chapter, so be a luv and hurry it up, savvy? Reese.

*grins big and shifts from foot to foot* Splendid. In my opinion (fortevetever little it means) I believe you captured Captain Sparrow impeccably, unlike some other writers (who, while they mean well, are undeniably daft as the day is long). This is the beginnings of something I look forwards to reading, the wonderfully Pirate-like train of thought coming from Jack making me a mite bit curious as to what you have planned... Now then, if you'd only be so kind as to continue writing... I'd be inclined to buy you a hat.... a BIG hat. ^____~

Ah, this is great. Your writing style is flawless, you you have seemed to capture Jack's personality perfectly. I hope you continue soon, I'm eager to see how Jack get's what he wants. Can I hope he shoots Elizabeth?

ooo!! This is so neat!

Jack's a little possessive, tain't he?
I love the connection between him and the Pearl, kinda creepy, but still nice.

there will be more, yes? I gotta know if Jack comes up with a plan to get Will! and if it succeeds!

Jack, considering how much your thinking of Will, I'd say he's got you.

Deffinately intriguing. I love how you describe the Pearl in Jack's mind, just the way I always see it. :) Please continue with it, I'll be sure to read it.

-Aithilin