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*After reading notes* Well, I should F*cking hope so! I hate those Bastard Jack fics. Pisses me off 'cause i don't think Captin Jack would do that, even to Will! Hope next one will have a happier ending.

Loved it. Can't wait for the sequel. *_^

Ahh...good pure smut. Yum!
Just a couple of things that I caught, beta-wise.
1."Once the older was completely in him..." The older what? "Older" is an adjective, it needs tocribcribe something.
2. In the last couple of paragraphs, something about "a damn ready to burst." The structure you're talking about is spelled d-a-m.
Also, that was a very interesting simile you used towards the end...not sure how I feel about it.

That was really good. I liked the detail and how you wrote the characters. I love Jack/Will, so keep up the good work! :)

- Tony.

*glomps* That was one of the most well-written J/W fics out there so far. ^__^ (Not that I'm the least bit choosy about the ones I do read...but you get my point, right? This was honestly one of the best.) I'm glad there isn't going to be any heartbreak for Will. (And even more glad the isn't a bastard!Jack)
Will wait for your next story to be posted!

Love, Pirates, Rum, and Slash.
Finduilas

Ooooh! Really wonderful! Though I'm not really picky
when it comes to Jack/Will smut, this was especially good!
Loveloveloved the pirate-talk and I totalgreegree, Will isn't a top.
Though, Will on top of Jack is rather tempting....
Yay fic!

Heehee, I like your view on Will's position (no pun intended! I swear!) in the relationship. Coincides with mine. Just can't picture him as a dominant one.

Anyway, great!

-Aithilin