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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this and I hope that you write more soon.
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this! Please keep writing!
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i am so gonna start whining again. you've been warned!
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Looks good so far!
Please updete soon!
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Please updete soon!
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and I can't wait to see where you take it next. Are you going to stick close to the film or take it more AU. I think Wil and Jack would be great together. Hope you write more soon!
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January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is intersting... am kind of miffed that Will was taken and he wasn't really aware of what was happening. Besides I think Jack would be better for him *LOL* post more soon please
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool, you're a Druid...
I'm a touch wiccan meself, though I don't pratice as faithfully as I should.... oi! But to tell you on the chapter. I think that it was very well done. I like the spin you take on the movie. The only comment I would make would be that instead of using ? you should use " " I noticed you only did that for the first few sections. Plus there are some grammar mistakes and sentence structure.
BUT! It's a very good plot and I think you wrote the characters very well. So it's only technical crap that needs working on. ^_^ Don't be discouraged, you definitly have talent. I hope you'll be able to update twice a week too! *runs off giggling*
I'm a touch wiccan meself, though I don't pratice as faithfully as I should.... oi! But to tell you on the chapter. I think that it was very well done. I like the spin you take on the movie. The only comment I would make would be that instead of using ? you should use " " I noticed you only did that for the first few sections. Plus there are some grammar mistakes and sentence structure.
BUT! It's a very good plot and I think you wrote the characters very well. So it's only technical crap that needs working on. ^_^ Don't be discouraged, you definitly have talent. I hope you'll be able to update twice a week too! *runs off giggling*
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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Pulls you back and kisses you again*
Ah, the witch was _even_ more fascinating, such a little mystery you are building up here! And Jack has discovered Will's identity- will this mean he won't want to seduce the boy? Or won'nt tnt to want to seduce the boy, but will want to anyhow???
And poor old Norrington without his husband... I bet he'll want to get Will back soon, and unspoiled.
Great part, girl! Want more :)
Ah, the witch was _even_ more fascinating, such a little mystery you are building up here! And Jack has discovered Will's identity- will this mean he won't want to seduce the boy? Or won'nt tnt to want to seduce the boy, but will want to anyhow???
And poor old Norrington without his husband... I bet he'll want to get Will back soon, and unspoiled.
Great part, girl! Want more :)
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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this so good hurry with jack/will goodness
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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am in much anticipation of the future course of this story. Excellently wrought.