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Oh Captain My Captain,
Thank you for responding to....ahem...all of my messages. No knives I swear. Sorry for the nightmares. I'll be good from now on anly tly thank you every time you update. Dat cool?
Oh yeah thanks for updating!

YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YOU ROCK!!!!! so keep up the good work!!
ps. are you going to explain the witch thing soon? oh and it's needs more Willy/ Eddie loving!! :-)

of course you can use my name! i would be thrilled dear Captian! maybe you could use it for W's d's daughter? maybe make a mpreg story out of it? or make it her some crazy pirate that dosen't know the meaning of 'proper' or how to spell it! :-) a missing cousin of Jack Sparrow prehaps?

i'm so proud you want to use my name so email me when you come up with something!!!!!! :-)

I the the story so far. But the only thing that urkes me the most is Norrington's name is Ja -tw -twitch- I know it's an AU and all, but yeah.

Um,

What's with the witch's power and all that.... I found that very confusing. But the rest I liked! It's quite interesting. Glad you updated, I was wondering what happened to this delightful tale! I love it! It's quite good. I'm soro heo hear about your engagement. Poo-poo on him! He sucks if he doesn't want to marry ye.

~lydia~

Oh captain, my captain!
So glad you are back with us I am sorry to hear your news however. Had I known the stress you were under I would not have made such a pest of myself. I am glad however that your talented self is updating this lovely story. Please tread lightly in the withcraft arena. Being pagan wicca myself I don't quite enjoy negative stereotypes. Of course, I do realize that this is fantasy, I mean if one could use witchcraft to ensnare Orli you bet your ass this witch would do it and I sure as hell would NOT share. I guess what I'm saying is that I know this is all make believe and I am enjoying it. Just please make sure that your other fans know that us witches don't go about being e-vil. Thanks,

Sorry but im pretty sure Norrington's name is James. I SWEAR! Anyways if not then continue without fail pweese. I like it very much so.

Wow, girl, I've been waiting and wishing and hoping and dreaming for this for ages *snogs you senseless*

A great new part and I can't wait for more.

I love the set up for the rest of the story, I certainly wasn't expecting the witch's arrival, and the slash was fabulous. I'd love to find out _exactly_ how much Will remember's of his first time, just a vague haze of pleasure, or the actual mechanics of Bas Basically how innocent is the boy still?

I am quite happy that you did not abandon this. Thrilling adventures ahead! I hope everything squares up in your life. My most ardent encouragement.