rate_review Reviews

Enjoying this one as well! Your vampires remind me of some in a book I read, "Knights of the Blood" by Scott MacMillan and Katherine Kurtz. They had enhanced strength and healing, and enhanced senses. They were photosensitive and didn't age. And, of course, drank blood. Slight photosensitivity, no problems with holy items, silver, etc. I like the psychic connection...very interesting. It could make for a very possessive & and overbearing Jack *delicious shiver*. Why didn't Jack feed Gibbs and Ana like he's feeding Willl, if it would provide a long-term boost to their control? Anyway, I hope you continue this story.

I.....love....this.....story. @_@ I never thought about Vampires in POTC, and you wrote the story incredably well. I just wanted to add my two cents and say that it's ok if you don't have a definite ending. I would love the story to go on forever. I'll be looking out for the next chapter and every time I come to AFF.net ay tay that you never have writers block again.

I'm really enjoying this so far. It's an interesting twist having Bootstrap turn Jack, and then Jack turn Bootstrap's son. Can't wait to find out William's reaction to his son having been turned into a bloodsucker like himself, let alone that Jack and Will are lovers. Will Bootstrap accept it or be against it, thinking Jack's corupted his "little boy"? And how will Will take to meeting is father? Plus what kind of relationship, beside a bloodsucking one *hehe*, did William and Jack have? I'm guessing they were also probably lovers, but that's up to you as the writer. I do hope you can find your way to keep writing this soon. I'm very interested in seeing which avenue oft cht choices you take.
If your still stuck on plot choices, feel free to drop me a line (make sure there's something about aff.net or Crew of the damned in the subject) and I'd be happy to brainstorm with you if it would help at all. I know all to well about the writing traps of trying to get figure out an "ending". Good luck! I hope you can figure out more soon.

::hands you a freeze frame and slomo playback muse recorder, her face solem and her eyes grinning::
I stole this handy-dandy tool from a few authors... may be cursed by some people for the now 4 year wait on book six, but thought you might need a muse version TVo...^___^ ;-P Lovelovelove this! mwahahaha! it is.... tres awesome!

Well to be truthful I didn't really much like the Idea of our boys being Vampires but I deceided that it wouldn't be fair not to read your story because of it....and well now I'm hooked.... Excellent story so far!!!!!! I have to admit my heart was in my throat at the beginning poor Will dying and Jack having nothing he could do tve hve him (Except that one thing) and then to have to make that chose to save his Will. Oh I just love it please please please update soon. :)

I'm liking this a lot.

Awesome story so far! Bootstraps eh? Can't wait for the next chapter!

i think i hit a wrong button. ya'know, it's not very nice to tease a girl before she has to go to work, who is it? Bill? Some stranger named William? Comeon, dying over here!! Love it!!! waiting eagerly for more, love yer work, lassie!!!!!

No worries, mate. We all have those bloody inspiration blocks at times. I'm sure you'll come through it well enough. Good to know you have brought some of it else where though. Hope to see you back soon. I really like the story so far and I think you've kept them IC very well. I think your writing style is excellent and am looking forward to seeing more.
'Til then, 'drink up me harties, yo ho...

Good story. I love the vampire angle, as well as Ann Rice's books, even the ones without vampires. Poor Will...I kind of feel sorry for him...stuck with Jack for all eternity.....