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for Breathe

by elfchic02

person YamiSeirei
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic, i kinda wondered myself what would have happened if Will hadn't got off the boat before it exploaded please write more and can i have a JS clone? thanks!! hehe
person tara
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dont leave it at that what the hell keep going come on please
person moona
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can I have more than one clone? Maybe two? Jack and Will clones would be greatly appreciated. Not that I'm greedy or anything. Well maybe I am. So what of it. Excellent story. The sea turtle bit, very funny. Please please update soon, absolutly must know what happens next.
person Mary Jane
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm sucked in... hope you write more soon
person alanna
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying your ficcie alot...*stares at front door for several minutes*... it's really quite good...*goes to look out window*... you've certainly got a talent for cliffhangers...*paces around apartment for several IMPATIENT minutes*... sure hope you'll update soon...*opens front door and stands out in the cold for a while*... you're quite a talented writer...*looks out window again then glares at computer*....WHERE THE F%#K IS MY ORLANDO BLOOM CLONE !!!!!!!!!!
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story so far. Keep it up! I look forward to the next update. If you have the time check out my pirates of the caribbean fic, it's called Kidnapped. Anyway, great job!
Inusgirl
person Jo
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great work so far!!! Please continue. Can't wait for the next update.
person Ibonekoen
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oy, poor Will. Interesting take on the movie. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
person Captain Jill
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
SEA TURTLES!!! LMAO!!!!!! (what mental problem?)

Captain Jill Loon of the Green Pea!
person Cait
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Sea turtles? That's hilarious. I almost gave up on you but I knew a story as good as this could never be abandoned. Update soon. I wanna see what happens with them turtles. Savi