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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good story. Interesting concept, most definitely.
I have one little nitpicky thing to point out, though -- the water in the Caribbean isn't cold.
I have one little nitpicky thing to point out, though -- the water in the Caribbean isn't cold.
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really I want a Johnny Clone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Alright well onto the review, just needed to tell you that I love this story...I have it in my favorites and everything on FF.net. I was wondering if you had abondoned it. Praying that you hadn't. It's so good to see another chapter!!!! :) Just love the sea turtle bit. That is so cute! "Take the boy." poor Will! What a way to go drowned and then feed to a sea monster. Jack wouldnt really do that now would he? Though I guess he is a pirate :) Please Please Please update more soon! Savvy?
And don't forget I want a Johnny Depp Clone!!!! you promised :)
Alright well onto the review, just needed to tell you that I love this story...I have it in my favorites and everything on FF.net. I was wondering if you had abondoned it. Praying that you hadn't. It's so good to see another chapter!!!! :) Just love the sea turtle bit. That is so cute! "Take the boy." poor Will! What a way to go drowned and then feed to a sea monster. Jack wouldnt really do that now would he? Though I guess he is a pirate :) Please Please Please update more soon! Savvy?
And don't forget I want a Johnny Depp Clone!!!! you promised :)
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September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Actually, when you think about it, in order for Jack to live, Will could die. In order for Will to live, Jack must live, so one must not die after all. *raises brow* A bit befuddled, but I think it gets across my meaning. If one dies, namely Jack 'cause Will's already dead and not yet revived, then both go. There's no other way, really. *grins*
Nope, it's not a flame, it's me talking myself out of getting tense about you killing off dear Captain Sparrow. I love Will and all, and they make one hell of a couple, but... Sheesh. No killing of the Jack! *w*
Not bad so far. Seems to be more A/N's than fic in that last chapter, but those are interesting too. Y'know, too, that an interesting thought occured to me. First watching the movie, and again reading this fic. If they blew up the one who is in actual living possesion of Bootstrap Bill's blood, then... The curse can never be lifted, can it? One good way to make the entire Barbosa crew go off thckercker would be to *tell* them why Elizabeth's blood didn't work out. Questioning Jack isn't going to do them much good, if Will's 'at the bottom of Davy Jones' locker'.
Interesting to see where you take this, if you take it further.
Nope, it's not a flame, it's me talking myself out of getting tense about you killing off dear Captain Sparrow. I love Will and all, and they make one hell of a couple, but... Sheesh. No killing of the Jack! *w*
Not bad so far. Seems to be more A/N's than fic in that last chapter, but those are interesting too. Y'know, too, that an interesting thought occured to me. First watching the movie, and again reading this fic. If they blew up the one who is in actual living possesion of Bootstrap Bill's blood, then... The curse can never be lifted, can it? One good way to make the entire Barbosa crew go off thckercker would be to *tell* them why Elizabeth's blood didn't work out. Questioning Jack isn't going to do them much good, if Will's 'at the bottom of Davy Jones' locker'.
Interesting to see where you take this, if you take it further.
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September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dude!!! Would u please hurry & update?!?!? PLEASE!!! If this was real Will would really be dead! Then u would have some very pissed off people 2 deal with! I am dying 2 know what happens! Why did u have 2 leave us with such a monstorus cliffie?!?!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I saw this story on fanfiction.net, but you wouldn't except an anonymous reviewer. Please continue your story I am enjoying it.
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
>>To my silent lurkers: review! I really wanna hear your thoughts on this!!!! :-P <<
...Fine... :P"
My two cents worth: you are evil! Your cliffhanger endings are just cruel, but they are very entertaining none-the-less. ;) I'm not a writer, so I have no idea how to judge plot, characters, dialog, etc. - I can just tell you that I'm enjoying the story and I'm looking forward to more postings from ya. Savvy? :)
My two cents worth: you are evil!
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
"To my silent lurkers: review! I really wanna hear your thoughts on this!!!! :-P" ...Fine... :P"
My two cents worth: you are evil! Your cliffhanger endings are just cruel, but they are very entertaining none-the-less. ;) I'm not a writer, so I have no idea how to judge plot, characters, dialog, etc. - I can just tell you that I'm enjg thg the story and I'm looking forward to more postings from ya. Savvy? :)
My two cents worth: you are evil!
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August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Grrrrr....*unseaths sword quickly and points it at ur heart* HOW COULD U LEAVE IT THERE!!!!!!! THERE IS NO WAY JACK WILL LET WILL DIE!!!! U CAN'T KILL JACK!!!! I WILL KILL U IF U DO!!!! DON'T EVEN FREAKING THINK ABOUT IT!!! update soon please...grrrr...thank u.
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August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ahh!! evil!! hurry! this is really exciting!! we want more more more!! please please!! *kisses* thank you so much!! this is awesome... though i wish it were slash.... but i can deal... *sigh* *smirk* *more kisses* thanx again!!
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August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
U r pure evil!!!!!!! Will AND Jack better live!!!!!!! i hope u continue this soon! Can't wait till you do!