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for To Feel Once More

by goblz

person Lina
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Erm... where's the first chapter? I'd really like it if you tried to repost it. Cause Chaps 2 and 3 are here but chap 1 is non existant...
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really good! I'll be looking forward to reading more of this :)
person Su
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, good story. I look forward to seeing more. I want to see how Elizabeth gets out of her engagement with Norrington-- if she does, that is.
person Sarryn
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thoroughly excellent tale. The bitter poignancy woven throughout is quite entrancing. I hope there is to be more.
person Angel Jade
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, I hope there'll be more soon. :o)
person Pookie
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
duuuude!

this is such a good story!

poor Will, no one deserves that :(
what happens next?

and was the Pearl destroyed? or just badly damaged?

update soon please!
person Beth
schedule August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. that chapter was excellent. i cant think of exactly what i want to say about it, but something made it "just right", as they say in the classics.
person Zhou
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm more then a little hooked. Please continue to update soon, as I am looking forwao reo reading the next chapter. I'll give a more detailed review later, as this little box to write is driving me insane. Keep up the good work.
person Briatta
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
First off, I like this story. It's well written and the characterizations seem to follow.

The only problem I have with these Will-bondage pieces, fun though they are, is that is is a BLACKSMITH. He pounds iron for a living; I don't care what Barbossa's been doing, he's not taking a blacksmith without grevious physical harm, even with Will restrained.

But, even so, I liked it. I'm curious as to how Will will react to the notion that Jack killed Barbossa, I'm sure he wanted the dubious honor.
person Beth
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, now not only do we have Will hurt, now now Jack angst :-) Yeah!!! ::grins mischeviously:: I'm really interested to see what happens now that Jack is aboard the Dauntless, with Will and Elizabeth still waiting in the caves. Very good, and I want more!