rate_review Reviews

for Indiana Jones and the Hidden Jewl

by Neverseenblue

person Adrianna

schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM

awesome story update soon :)

person Detroit

schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Love the story keep it up

person AppleOfBlood

schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM

I liked the story except for several repeated mistakes that I noticed. First Indy's colleague Marcus is Dr. Brody, not Dr. Brady. Second, Dr. Jones' name is not Indian, it is Junior (recall the third movie). Third, his nickname is Indiana (as in the state or his childhood dog) or Indy for short.

Please continue writing but consider acquiring a Beta.

person Daesare

schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM

O.O Yummy. Please write another chapter soon! It's really good!

person zad

schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Oooh, I like it. There were a few spelling mistakes in the second chapter, but I want to read the third!

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