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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely stunning!!!!!!
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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The first second-person fic I've been able to get two paragraphs into--consider yourself praised! The character development is good, the lovemaking hot, the dialog mostly fitting. The woman's revelation is a bit over the top, but only in terms of pacing. A more gradual demonization of her evil spouse, even if there _isn't_ really room for it in the length of the story, would have been more plausible. And just as scary.
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December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story and its concept. For a moment there you had me wondering if you'd actually have him come back or not. I do like what you decided to do but I would have been satisfied if he'd not come back. It was lovely.
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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story so much! I cried and not many stories can make me do that. I would love to see more about this pairing! Wonderful job!
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October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved it so much!
Especially the perspective is quite daring and it works out really well.
I like the way you write about Jack, him being tender and loving, yet he never stops being a pirate captain, someone who is used to killing and stealing if necessairy, someone who has a responsibility for his crew, no matter which personal sacrifices he has to make.
Thanks for a splendid read!
Arella.
Especially the perspective is quite daring and it works out really well.
I like the way you write about Jack, him being tender and loving, yet he never stops being a pirate captain, someone who is used to killing and stealing if necessairy, someone who has a responsibility for his crew, no matter which personal sacrifices he has to make.
Thanks for a splendid read!
Arella.
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October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story rocked my world. You deserve a medal. Write some more stories, will you?
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September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful. I would never expect something like that from AFF.net. Go you. And one never runs across 2nd PoV very often. Clever. That was just great...It left me with a smile on my face. Please, write more. Write a sequel...write SOMETHING!!!! Bye.
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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You HAVE to do a sequel! Please, please, plllllleeeeeaaaaaassssssse! *begs lovely author shamlessly*^_^
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August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story drew me in because I've always loved the Don Henley song with this same title. Was there something about that lyric that inspired you to write this story? You have a great command of plot, character, and action that moved along terrifically. You were true to the character of Jack shown in the movie. What is it about Jack that haunts me so? I've read your story several times and will keep re-reading it. I hope to see more of your work here. Thanks for your effort!
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August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This has been certainly one of the most erotic encounters I ever had with the written . My. My heartfelt thanks for this wonderful experience. I shall watch out closely for your name on the wide open sea of fanbased literature and hope to encounter it again.