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This is absolutely FABULOUS.

Awwwww this was the bestest POTC fic i have read in a very long time. I like sex with a plot and thats exactly what it is. lol but keep up the good work!! This was great!

Love this so far. Glad you worked in a bath for Jack. I'm afraid the only fantasy I find myself capable of with him would have to involve a larg and especially potent bottle of Rid. Just jidding- i love Jack. Keep writing please!

This is brilliantly written, Jack is totally in character and the descriptions are beautifull. It is also very clever how you have written it, in the present tence without naming or describing the woman overly much- any reader could insert herself into the story. Very nice! I'm on part two and can't wait to read the rest!

All finished now and what can I say? This was just wonderfull, I really enjoyed it. Oh, I can think of one thing to say at least: Sequal? Please?

This was a truly fantastic story. I read it this morning, actually, with my coffee while getting ready for work. Ended up getting to the office about ten minutes late because I didn't want to stop reading. You did some great stuff with this story: not only was it hot as hell and very moving besides, the writing style was phenomenal. It's damned hard to write in second person, and you pulled it off amazingly well. I very much enjoyed reading it, even if I did have to take a short lunch today!

O.M.G.

I looooooooooooooooooved it!!! I can't believe you made it so complete with only three chapters!! Absolutely wonderful work! Very clever and detailed history of the woman's past, I very much enjoyed reading that though it shocked me terribly. And you portrayed Jack exeptionally well, absolutely marvelous!! Two thumbs up here!

Now...have you ever though of a sequel...? ::looks hopeful:: because I would VERY much enjoy one! ^________^