rate_review Reviews

Wow..What a story. Took me many days to get through, but ..it was awesome. The plotline had me hanging on till the last moment.

just wanted to tell you that I love this story and I really love nell, she's awsome! I'm only on cahpter 12 as of now, there just so long and I don't have much time to read so i'll get threw it one day! ha! juat wanted to tell you that your a great writer and I love the srotry and can't wait to finish it so i can read the next one!

I'm fascinated with this story. I discovered it yesterday morning and have been reading it nearly all day and into the next. Just finished chapter 24 and I can't quit, even though it's now 1:24 am! The characterizations are stupendous! The only thing that has bothered me is that the crewman taking care of Will Turner is also named Daniels - the same name of the man whom Jack punished for assaulting Nell. Also, Knowles was beheaded with Brown in the caves, so what's he doing with the rest trying to get past the piranhas? Hate to be nitpicky but these things threw me. Still, this is a wonderful story and definitely in league with Hils' and Ani Sparrow's best! Wish I could figure out how to bookmark in adultfanfiction.net.

Hi. Hils recommended that I read your story. I am very intrigued. I look forward to the remaining 40+ chapters in addition to the related story you have posted. I've the feeling the our Jack will be more interested in Nell than in the Lady Clarence. Glad to know that some men (even if they are fictional) will go for character and personality (Nell) instead of dark good looks (Clarence).

What is going on with Nell and the monks in her head?! I must know! Update soon! This is the most amazing story ever!!

Oh, thank you for not making Jack talk like a pirate! I whole-heartedly agree with you about him having an English accent and NOT a silly pirate one. Not that pirate accents are silly now, I'm simply saying that Johnny Depp is a genius in giving Jack a more sophisticated manner of speaking, and trying to change that in writing does not work. It is so much easier to hear him speaking as I read without having to sort though lines like "Yer not gonna take me gold" and crap like that. I apologize for ranting, but this story is such a relief, and quite a good read! Just thought I'd let you know.

holy hell!!! none of the novel's i've read in the past couple of years. even compare to this. you've had me utterly glued since i first read the first chapter 2 weeks ago. if it hadn't been for school. i probably would've read it in less than 3 sittings. your story line/plotting is right up there with rice and king. you elicit everything we wish brockheimer and gore could do, but are confined within Disney's morals and codes. lol Disney make a rated R movie? NEVER!

i love have your story isn't a pronographic pos where every other chapter there is sex. you built all of the readers up until the very end. and it was like we all got to enjoyed Nell and Jack's relationship come to a climax. heh.. literally. (couldn't resist mate). but the story wasn't just about them. it involved all of the other characters as well. and they had life and their own personality they were just flat characters. -sigh- it is 3:12am eastern standard. and i am ready to pass out.

p.s. was ch 35 the final? if so..

second installment? i beg you!

WOW. i'm only five chapters deep in this thing and i'm hooked! i'm actually happy they are so long .. i normally hate long chappies, but these are just right and fit the story well! ooo... i wonder what'll happen when/if they meet up with Beaumont... is there anything between jack and Nell? and i HOPE Will's not badly hurt... well, i'm off the read more! just telling you this has got to be one of the best POTC stories i've read. and Jack seems in character, love the arm movements. LOL.

tootles

This story is absolutly GREAT... You are one heck of a writer lass :D

Finally! Fantastic! One of the best-written Jack/OC 'first-time' scenes I've read, and I've read A LOT of them! Well done!