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for The Map

by Boshomengro

schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, that was so creepy. I actually held my breath at one point, I'm not a big fan of dark enclosed spaces. If it wasn't Watts' hand Nell held then who's was it I wonder. I know it can be difficult writing and caring for a small child at the same time and I aplaud you for the wonderful length of your chapters and the regularity that you up-date. (Falls on knees and bows with hands above head) We're not worthy, we're not worthy. I can't wait to see what you have in store in the next chapter. xox
person PirateAurora
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, very well done!!! Now we need more!!
person Michelle
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooooohoooooo! It's like my birthday or something! Most excellent! Can't wait for the next chapter 'cause it just keeps getting better. I will say that I hope some Jack lovin' is in the works real soon though. ; ) lol

~Michelle AKA RenegadeWriter
person Nicki
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I read this non-stop until I had finished because it is so amazingly written I could not stop. You get the characters perfectly and your style has a unique flair that makes it enthralling. I hope you intend to keep writting and updating regularly. Your ability to make it truly frightening proves that you are talented. I cannot wait for the hookup between nell and jack. Do you plan on continuing with this story onto other adventures after the cursed island? I think you should just make it an ever going story, the characters are too good to let go. I rarely find a story that I read through completely or want to but yours is definetly one of them!!! Do you send out emails when you update? I included my email in case you do or would be willing to. Keep it up you are rilliant!!h
person BitterAndDeranged
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello Boshomengro,

I just thought I'd write you a quick note to say that I absolutely love your fic! It's easily the best PotC fic, anywhere. It has been put on my all time favourite's list. ^_^ And I'm really picky. Everything is perfect. I actually feel for the characters. The violence is chilling and when I read the latest chapter, I could just about SEE Jones crawling up the waterfall...*shudders* I freaked out, damn you! Lol The relationship between Jack and Nell is "interesting". *does best Jack impression* I'm still guessing as to what will happen with them. I really like that. It makes the tension that more enjoyable.

Anyway, keep up the good work and I await your update with barely suppressed glee!

Best wishes,

BitterAndDeranged

P.S: Ok, that wasn't very short! ^_^
person Mars
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! I admit, that all the curse stuff on the island has me kind of scared. It's very atmospheric and creepy.
My favorite line here was when Jack asks, bewildered, if they are really that frightening. ^_^

Update soon!

Oh, and saw a couple chapters back that you are a fan of Snape and Spike? Goodness, how is it that people are attracted to the same types of characters. Those are among my favorite personas, too, ones that I have obsessed over. Crazy, crazy world of fiction.
person MarzBar
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gadz! How much more supernatural danger do they have to go through to get some treasure and get off the island alive? More please.
person PirateAurora
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I just finished reading your story and it's fabulous! Please post some more soon it's such a treat to read and I've looked forward to it so much. It's a real nail-biter and I need more!!
person LadyAthena
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have always loved this story and am so happy you are able to update more regularly. I have 4 children and completely understand how time can slip away from you. Wonderful chapter, can't wait for more!
person LadyFifi
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello!

Yes this made my day a whole lot better!! I absolutly love this fic, and I especially love snuggly Jack!