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for The Map

by Boshomengro

person Anni
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that you have chosen to continue this story. It is very well done. A good portrayal of Jack and interesting OCs.
person MarzBar
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a relief to find an update on this story. Thought you had forgotten us. Glad you are feeling better now so I can hope for more soon please.
person Jessia
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story. I hope you keep up the great work and post more soon. Only a little grammatical advice to share though... It's either 'was standing' or 'stood', and it's either 'was sitting' or 'sat,' not 'was stood' or 'was sat'. I really enjoy reading your work, but those mistakes were just a little distracting. And the extra letters and weird stuff that keeps popping up when you upload is a problem all over aff.net. It's been going on for months in all categories and fandoms; it's not anything you're doing wrong.
person MarzBar
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yikes! I hope you will continue this story. I must admit I grow weary of stories about women who are about as dumb as dirt but I did feel you were going to smarten her up and eventually see that Cap'n Jack may be the best she could possibly do under the circumstances. I know for a fact that it is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.
person SpiritOfLupin
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmmmmm, the thought of Jack Sparrow washing my back, (goes off into a daydream). On a serious note, congratulations, you must have had the baby by now, hope all went well. Now if you could only get your other half to take baby Boshomengro out for a while you could maybe get the next chapter posted? Not that I'm eager at all, (grin). Hope you get round to it soon. xx
person killer k
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
haven't heard any thing in awhile- hope all is well w/ the babe. A killer story! Can't wait for the lovin' to begin!
person creamywhiteskin
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
congradulations for the baby!
and i loved the last chapter, can't wait to see what happenes next.
person flesh tuxedo
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whew. This is one incredibly well written story, you've nailed and given depth to the characters, and this story is really addictive, i hope that you don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter. Congrats on the baby.

Ives
person Anon
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!

I really love this story, hurry and post more! Soon! Lol!

person peachy
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I did the happy dance when I saw that you had updated! And here I thought that maybe you didn't love us anymore. LOL Absolutely love this story! I'm glad to hear that you are feeling better, and that your energy is returning. I hope that the rest of your pregnancy goes well, and your little one is healthy.
~ Peachy