AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for The Map

by Boshomengro

person megan
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you decided to update this fic, for a while I thought that you forgot about it. I really love this story, and can't wait till you add more to this wonderful fic! Loved this chapter, I hope you add some lemony goodness soon..hehe. Congrats on your pregnacy! Keep up the excellent work, and please update as soon as possible!

Meg
person peachychic
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok. I love this fic. I find your characterization of Jack fascinating, aelieelievable. Nell is a gem, and I like that you have portrayed Norrington as a reasonably nice guy, because that's how I felt about him in the movie. I also love the fact that you have drawn out the sexual tension. It's fun to watch, and I think it makes for a more realistic story. Not that a little pirate lovin' wouldn't be fun too...LOL. So if I must beg, I will. I know you are busy with your house, but PLEEEEEEEASE update soon!

Michelle
person megan
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM

I'm so glad that you updated this fic!! I almost thought you forgot about it, I would be so sad! I love this fic you have Jacks character done to the tea, and I just love Nell! You are a great writer keep hope the good work and please update soon!
person Anni
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
After months of reading all sorts of ffs, I stumbled onto this little (huge?!) gem of a story. I read the whole thing at once (a lot of time on my hands, huh?) What good work! Intricately woven, classic Jack, believeable OC. Keep up the good work.
person MmC
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! the plot is great and i nell is so cute and innocent. lol. update often...
person Spaci
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a long wait! But it's worth it! I can't wait to see what you have planned to be on that island. I'm sure it'll be great. And I can't wait for more private scenes between Jack and Nell! I also want to thank you for not making Norrington seem like a jerk like a lot of other stories do because I didn't think he was from the movie. So anyway, please keep up the great work and update soon!
Spaci
person C.J. Davis
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was SO happy to see this story updated. I like the chapter actually. I understand why you feel it was uneventful as far as getting to the island, but I still like it.

C.J.
person wintermoondancer
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SOOO Happy to see an update!! I'm glad you got them onto the island. I thought this last chapter was informative and exciting. I always love getting a little glimpse of the good Captain that we don't often see. You make a good point...there is so much more than meets the eye! I bet you are having a ball with your hous wou would love to move and start from stratch with color and everything. HAVE FUN!! And thanks again for the new chapter.
person Ani Sparrow
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Please, please and thrice please update this story! I'm going mad with impatience here.
person creamywhiteskin
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just LOVE this story! There should be a sequal to the mouvie based on it:) Please update soon, can't wait to see what happenes next!