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I beg of you, please, please PLEASE update!!!! I'm dying here!!

Yeah!!!! I have been waiting for more. Thank you thank you. I am so wrapped up in this story. I can't wait to see how it ends. More please (lol)

Just wanted to thank you for the updates you did while I was ill that I printed off and read but didn't get to properly thank you for. You and Citadel really helped me pass some seriously miserable nights. Yea more updates! You're killing me with the waiting. You know that right? :-)

Hugs,

Tricia

Another gr wel well writen chapter! You're such a great writer! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Spaci

That high-pitched squeal you hear is me, excited about this new chapter! Please keep it coming!

What a great surprise to sign on and find a new chapter!! Drinks all around!!! I love this fic. Hope to read more soon!!(hint. hint) You write Jack so well.

UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! I love, love, LOVE this story!! it is the best one I've read so far!!! Keep up the GREAT work!!
Spaci

I've read many PotC-FanFics and I just wanted to say that yours is so far (in my opinion) the best! It was very funny and exciting to read and the caracters are very realistic, so I hope you will soon continue with your story!
Vanessa from Switzerland

This has got to be just about the only original character fic I've ever been able to stomach/really enjoy - ever. Your nack for developing multi-faceted and wonderful characters of your own while still keeping all of the old characters true to their personalities is amazing, and you're just an overall good writer to boot. Your story has me hooked, and, unlike a staggering number of other fics on the site, it has a plot! My only suggestion is.... watch out for Nell. Her personality seems to be walking the thin line between amusing and simply lacking in depth as of late. Her pure ways and aversion to everything raunchy helps to keep her from drifting over into the dreaded area of Mary-Sue's... but sometimes enough is enough, and it would be cool if she could just say something nice to Jack everyone once and a while. Sorry if I soud presumptuous, since you're deff ten times the writer I'll ever be, rest assured. Good work on a great fic and please add to the story soon!!

Please, please update!! Your story is the best fan-fic that I've comeoss oss in a long time! The characters are great, you've really captured the ones already there, and created some more memorable ones. Keep up the fabulous work!! PLEASE!!