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Wow. Now I'm thinking that when Jack inevitably leaves her at port and sails on to other adventures, it would be cool if Norrington came to court her :) Norrington's quite a cool guy when he isn't trying to hang poor Jack. I hope Jack goes medieval all over Beaumont! Yea! This is such a good story! :)

Hope the move went well (maybe we'll hear a short humorous move in story in the notes next chapter?). I liked this chapter, especially the cliffhanger ending (I'm all for those, gives you something to look forward to ;P). Beaumont, even though evil, is one cool "chapman", maybe I have a tendency for evil, who knows? Ah yes, too many innocents reading over at ff.net - Cannot. Ruin. The children's pure souls... ::lol:: Pulling things out are a lot more fun to read, too, but I know from experience that it's quite hard to write that way. Oh well, I'll just leave the writing for troferofessions, namely you Starlight, and sit back and enjoy the ride ^__^

By the way, I commented here at aff.net while ff.net wouldn't allow me to write a signed review. It does that at times, why I don't know. Oh, and I bought a chocolate christmas calender already - me=big child - I don't think it'll last 'till December...

this fic is amazing. i've been following it since day one and it has yet to let me down. i adore it. you are an awesome writer, and i gotta say, mad props to the long updates. try to write more soon, kay? i understand how life can get though, so i'll just be sitting here waiting [im]patiently. haha.

oh, and your login name reminds me of the japanese poet basho and his hut of the phantom dwelling. haha.

Best of luck with your new home. I moved two years ago and my children are still upacking their toys from boxes. Please up date soon I love your work.

its absolutely brilliant! i love it. the errors keep coming up on some stories i've done as well, i have no idea why. they arent too bad on your though, i barely noticed them. please update REALLY soon! istalindar

its absolutely brilliant! i love it. the errors keep coming up on some stories i've done as well, i have no idea why. they arent too bad on yours though, i barely noticed them. please update REALLY soon! istalindar

I was tryin' not to be pushy because I knew you were moving soon, but YEA! I'm so glad we got last minute goodies before you did. Please do hurry with more :) For that was a very much cliffhanger. But... you've also set us up for Jack rescue later so I'm prepared to forgive just about anything. I am a SUCKER for a good rescue, especially ones starring our handsome Captain! I'm quite excited for the next part now... but, wh, when aren't I :)

Hope everything goes smooth with your house move dearie. And as always, MORE MORE MORE : Tri Tricia

Wonderful story! Jack's in character, which is not an easy thing to do, I think. I'd hate to try and write him myself. Loving Denial!Jack, 'though I hope Nell sets him back on his smug ass soon. On the subject of Nell ... I normally avoid stories with an original character as a central part of the story, especially a female one - the dreaded Mary Sue. But I like Nell. She is a well developed, believable character and the relationship between her and Jack is coming along in a natural fashion (and is fun besides!) I hope your move goes smoothly (my sympathies, I hate moving house!) Keep it coming!

Once again, absolutely wonderantabulous!

Your updates never fail to cheer me up :)

Can't wait to read more!

Aww, Jack was kind of a meanie butt in that one. It'll serve him right if next time Nell makes him wait...oh...minutes before letting him have his way :)

Keep 'em comin'