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How...


How...do...you...DO IT?!


That was friggen incredible. I have no idea how you do that! INcredible...and like fifty pages of it too! My God!


I'm really just...stunned, as it were. That was AWESOME.


I can't WAIT to read more, I'm hoping against hope that it'll be sometime soon! :)

I love this story! It actually has a plot! I can't wait for your next update, keep up the good work!

How can I put into words how much I adore this fiction? I dare say it is impossible, but I shall try. Firstly, it is so incredibly rare to find an author who writes Jack Sparrow as convincingly as you do. Every word, every motion, every facial tick in this story is PURE, unadulterated Jack! You keep him entirely in character and that's coming from someone who knows how incredibly difficult that man's sentence structure can be! I commend you. Secondly, Nell is fast becoming near and dear to my heart. As wonderful a job as you've done in keeping things realistic by not having Jack fall for her immediately, I HAVE indeed fallen in love with her this quickly! (Only three chapters in and I'm in love, what can I say? I wear my heart on my sleeve) She is such a fun character as well as being entirely believable. As are the other characters in fact. The interaction between Lady Clarence and Jack as well as the way Jack talks about her in reference has had me belly laughing several t. Al. All of the characters in this story are absolutely stealing my heart. (Hock especially is giving ol' Jack a run for his money ::swoon:: ) Even the ones who appear only for a bit, like Jimmy, have such spunk! Not to mention your eye for historical detail! I've been researching the era of buccaneers for my own fiction and your info is dead-on accurate as far as I can tell. And I've even found out a few things I didn't know before! Lastly, the story itself is incredible. I am so hookecan\can't begin to tell you how much I rely on finding out what happens next. You are a truly brilliant author and this fiction is one of the best, if not THE best, POTC fiction I've read (and I've read a lot of them!). Please, I implore you, keep writing! I am sure I speak for many many people when I say that if this story goes by the wayside we shall all be very sad ;_; You have my complete adoration and support! Happy writings!
-Love-
TheMiscellaneousSparrowGroupie
a.k.a
Lizzie

Just loved it. Actualy the first Pice of PotC that I could read more than one chapter of. 8D Great work, an keep it up. *smiles*

Excellent as always! I absolutely love every time there is interaction between Jack and Nell. It is just so fun tad aad and often times causes me to smile or right out laugh. You’ve got Jack’s character nailed down perfectly in my opinion, which is a feat that not all can accomplish with the grace that you have. I must say that there are few stories I enjoy reading more than this, and those are written by professional authors. You truly are a magnificent writer, with a marvelous talent in word usage. The plot elements for this story are also nothing short of excellent, full of twists! I absolutLOVELOVE it and cannot WAIT till your next update! And that’s another thing, your updates are always quite lengthy which is just all the more wonderful for I can safely say that this story cheers me up considerably when I read it! :) :)

i've just read chapter two. i think this is a rather good story. you must continue!

I can tell this is gonna be one of my favorites! Everyone read this fic right now!
Talented and imaginative writer warning!

Omg! What an awesome LONG update! ^_________^

I think you're right on with your perception of Jack. I too think the whole drunken, slightly mental image is a clever cover-up that lets him get away with things; he uss that to his advantage. Bloody BRILLIANT work, I love it! Update soon! :) :)

I love it so far! Do carry on!!! ^_____^

Good start! I got a lil confused when she started all that nun stuff. When they go port royal are they going to run into Will? upgradon! on!