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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! You do have a way of keeping me on the edge of my seat...can't wait for more...
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, omg, two chapters at once! What a treat!!! AH, so lovely, the scene we've all been waiting for. Am I a sick puppy for reading it over and over!!????
Love the way you write, and describe all the characters. Jack in this story is so sexy and endearing. sigh....More! More please More~!!
Love the way you write, and describe all the characters. Jack in this story is so sexy and endearing. sigh....More! More please More~!!
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! you have done it! I was cheering for jack when he finally got laid! poor jack^^having had to prove so much self-controle.
i love the idea that they will stay together, nell and jack.
but the thought of norrington and bryant turning bad asses would be pretty cool too :D
im totally for the "norrington retires and becomes best pals with jack" route.
anyway! thank you for the update! 2 chapters at once! what a treat!
kate
i love the idea that they will stay together, nell and jack.
but the thought of norrington and bryant turning bad asses would be pretty cool too :D
im totally for the "norrington retires and becomes best pals with jack" route.
anyway! thank you for the update! 2 chapters at once! what a treat!
kate
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If my fellow readers thought that was hot work reading it - spare a thought for me having to trying and edit it! Bravo, my dear, and about bloody time too!
I have to say, I fall more and more in love with your James Norrington with each chapter - he is such a lovely, gorgeous man and the banter at the end between him and Bryant was just inspired!
I have to say, I fall more and more in love with your James Norrington with each chapter - he is such a lovely, gorgeous man and the banter at the end between him and Bryant was just inspired!
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally! I'm sure everyone was anticipating this scene for the last 15 chapters or so. Lovely story. Is it finished, and if so, any chance for a sequel?
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was very cute. and i like the way the chapter finished with norrington and bryants chat. it pulled it all together nicely.
keep up the good work!
keep up the good work!
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was at the other fanfiction and saw your most recent chapter but the one here is missing the first half of it. It's great though if you read it there first and then come over here for the naughty bits! Well done again. Please keep writing.
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this is the best Jack on the planet. And iffin u don't update this story soon, I'll be forced to whack at you once or thrice with a wiffle bat. :) Just to get the creative juices flowing once more. :)
Siren
Siren
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its getting good
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely!!! Love your story!! Waiting patiently for the next chapter!! okay, that's a lie. VERY difficult to be patient!!
Keep up the great work!!
Keep up the great work!!