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for The Map

by Boshomengro

person M M
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I was really expecting the scary stuff to get hoaky, but you did an admirable job. You could always delay the next scene by having Jack decide they really should wait until the get married (Ha!). Though most of your readers would threaten to make you walk the plank! A lovely read as always.
person lili
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An update! lets party like its on sale for $19.99!
i am so glad that off that godforsaken island!
can't wait for the next chapter
keep up the good work love
person kate
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! THEY ARE ALL WELL!!
and she is jacks woman!
that chapter was just as exciting as a lost episode!
(and me as a hardcore lost fan...) lol
i cant wait for the next chapter!
please update sooN!

person PirateAurora
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whewww!! That chapter was well worth the wait! And don't worry about the next chapter - i'm sure it will be fabulous. It's certainly promising to be delicious! Wonderful story - please keep writing and posting.
person kate
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update!! come on! we havent heard from u in a month!
please update! i need that story like i need air to breath!
kate ;D
person Shaggie
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn that good. You better finish this fic or ...I will curse you. Yeah that right, I do it to.
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I can wait much longer. *whines* I'm trying to be patient but I can't hold out much longer here. *builds more shrines in your honor* Does that help speed up the creative process? lol
person Depp.Me
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh did you ever leave us hanging! Hurry!!!
person PirateAurora
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not a cliffhanger?!?!?! Arghhh. Wonderful, wonderful story; beautifully written - just need more, with happy endings of course!
person anon
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! If I wasn't already married I would propose.

I love your story! *builds shrines in your honor*

This has me on the edge of my seat. I loved the latest chapter. The story has a good arc and it builds up better than expectation. It just doesn't stop. I love it. It's great. I worship the ground you walk on.