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Nice update!^^
I love how you made a yaoi pairing in this story... and I love even more how the twists keep going and the horrors adding up and ... yeah. I do hope, though, that Jack stops acting all cold and stiff towards Nell and he finally says that he loves her...
Ah, I'll be waiting and watching for your next update!

NO DONT LET HER STAY ON THE ISLAND! I WILL DIE! DON'T MAKE HER SACRIFICE HERSELF!
NOO THIS IS UNBEARABLE!

update soon!
and thanks for the quick update!

kate

I love your story so much.. still hoping for a happy ending :)

oooooooooh whats jack gunna dooooooooooo

Wonderful read, truly enjoying it. You have a fine gift for writing. I've been following it ever since you started it and I think I'm going to hate to see it end!

yeah, another chapter, this story just keeps getting better and better! I can't wait till the next chapter to see whats going to happen!!

Thank you for the chapter! It's absolutely gripping and I love what's been happening. Very well written. Want more. More. Please let them get safely off the island and onto the Pearl!

I took four hours in reading this story thoroughly through and through and I LOVE it. At first I thought the plot was going to be kinda off track and un believable but this story could have really been weaved into the POTC story so this story is just a phenominal accomplishment. I really hope you update soon because I had forgottent o review every chapter whilst I was reading the story but I checked here everyday for a week and there was no change and I wasn't certain if that was because the chapters take a long time to write or because you weren't getting any reviews... So here I am, reviewing.
I really....really like how you made your OC, its completely believable and absolutely riveting at how you take the story at a pace where it just keeps your attention all the way through even though the chapters are long and detailed. Everything is perfectly constructed and its a crazy thought, but if this was a book you could probably publish it!
Anyways, keep up the good work please and I hope to see an update from you soon!
Biokinetic

I have just spent the last three days reading this story, and I absolutely love it! You have managed to write an adventure that firstly, portrays Jack not as an imbecile, not as an inconsistent drunkard, but as Jack, the lovable sexy but strange pirate who damned-well knows what he's doing. Not only this, you have also created a wonderful original character who I enjoy thoroughly. You have employed so many of your own characters and plots. Plus, the events on the island are very interesting. It's very much "what'll happen next?"

I like to try to give well-rounded critiques, but right now, I've read so much that I don't believe I can point out specific thngs. Reguardless, thanks very much for providing me with something to help ignore my work. Baited breath till the next chapter!

You reveal just enough new info to keep me unsure of the outcome and interested in figuring it out.