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for The Map

by Boshomengro

person PirateAurora
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!!! Hopefully I'll be able to let out my breath once they're back on board the Pearl? Poor Nell, she needs some serious lovin'. Beautiful writing, lovely to read. Keep going please!!!!!
person michele
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for a new chapter to come home to and read!! It's GREAT!!! Just please don't let Nell end up with Norington or Bryant!! Absolutely love this story. Please keep up the great work!! SO looking forward to it!!!!
person kate
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes, its me again!
thank you so much for the update! this is getting freakier every time :D
hehe.. and i sense some jealousy from jacks side. serves him right! he needs some competition.
just to keep him on his toes of course ;D
i hope they will make it off.
again: DON'T KILL ANY MORE PEOPLE! i will go nuts if you put more tension into this. the part
where jack was about to sink into the quicksand i nearly choked on my orange juice.
hehe
and i could do with some more jack/nell scenes ;D just for lightning up the angsty mood of course
KEEP GOING! please update VERY SOON again!

kate
person beachmlt
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gawd, I love this story...please continue and quickly if you can. :-))
person lum
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful new chapter. I like the direction this is going in, please continue full steam ahead. :)
person Jess
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, you have to write the next chapter. AND SOON!, this story is brilliantly planned, the plot is thick, I swear to god Im going to have night mares about that guy climbing up the side of the water fall. *Shivers at thought* its just like the Ring 2..... Keep up the great work, you rock!
person lili
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay for PDA!
person megan
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yah another chapter!! Finally Nell told Jack how she feels, I wonder how he will respond?? Anyways keep up the wonderful work, and hopefully you'll update this story soon...I'm so addicted to it!!
person kara
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really hope you don't plan on killing anyone important off or making it take a sour turn because i think it would really destroy people's love for the story and you would lose your followers. i think they should get back to the pearl, make hot passionate love, and then continue on into another new and exciting characters that we can fall in love with. the story should not end, ever. they should just keep having new adventures because the way you write is too good to give up.

more soon please!
kara
person M M
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No cold feet! Keep on going. i think it is really good anyway, and I eagerly await your next update.