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Please continue writing! And don't worry about where the story is heading - as long as it's 'happily ever after'! :-P It's very intriguing and I can't wait to see where it's going. Get off the d*mn island!!!

OMG!!! Am completly loving this!! The suspense and tone is great, and the genuine characterisation just gets better with the chapters!

i absolutley adore the little jack/nell scenes. please more of them! she is so cute and he is so cute around her:D

but OMG! so scary! im still not sure wether the monks are good people or bad people, and what does the monk mean with "ull see"?
i hope they will suffer no more sacrifices and that they'll make it off the island in time!
and the village better be a nice, peaceful place! i dont think i can handle much more tension or conflicts :D I NEED COMIC RELIEF :D or at least more :D

i love your story!

kate

I was wondering if you had forgotten about the hand incident. I'm glad you tied it back in. I also like the fact that there isn''t a clear cut "good guy" in your fic. Good work. Keep it up.

WoW.... I'm speechless O.O this fic is just great totally fantastic!!! Your writing style is really really good you make people feel with the characters and you discribe the places and surroundings so perfectly that you could easly imagen yourself standig right beside them! It is incredible!!! And than the relationship between Jack and Nell it is so sweet and innocent but at the same time full of sexual tension and wit.... it is funny, interesting and enchanting to read about them and the adventures they have together!!!! I'm really glad that I got bored of all the LOTR fic's and so got the chance to read this brilliant fic *gg*
I really hope the next chapter will come soon because I can't wait to see who exactly it is who has his hands on Nell's shoulder (I think it is on of the monks and they want her for themself!!) but thats to see ^^
Oh and yeah befor I forgett.... I love your brain *laughs* no I really do it is brilliant and full with fantasie!!!! Just love it *gg* soooooooo hope see ya soon!

Bye Saikobi ^^

Ohhh, so deliciously good!!! What a cliffhanger! I hope you update soon because I'm totally sucked in - very well written. Thx you!

This story is better than most published books i have read. I think your story detail and plot line are amazing and i hope you plan on continuing for many a more chapters because you inspire me to be a better writter. thank you for your continuing updates and i can't wait for the next one!!

yeah yet another wonderful chapter!! Creepy I wonder who the guy is, is it the person who held her hand in the cave?? Anyways I'm glad that there was more Jack/Nell romance I can't wait for more of that!! You're an awsome auther!! Keep up the good work, and hopefully you update soon!!

Hey! Sorry I haven't been around to review the last few chapters. Going through a divorce, a move, etc. Anyway, awesome stuff here, as always! I think that this last chapter was great, so go ahead and keep going in whatever direction you were thinking because I know that I can't wait to see what happens next. : D Take care.

~Michelle AKA RenegadeWriter

Thank you for the next chapter! This is a wonderfully interesting piece of writing and I am always on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what happens next - love the island and it's foibles! Love the character development, love everything. Please add more!!!