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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a great story. Keep it coming!
...please?
...please?
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more!!!!! Please! Your story is so engaging and well written. Please!!
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've only read the first chapter. I think that you are spot on for Captain Jack. I too thought that the way that most people wrote him was good, but then I saw the movie again. That is how he talks, but it's not what he says. He's very articulate. I think you did very well with that. I can't wait to read the rest of it.
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am ready for sex! i think them getting it on would help them regain sanity and make them remain sane longer. wonderful story anyway!
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How dare you leave us there! At the end of the chapter..
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! and wonderfully written! I am enjoying it so much. Please hurry and get more posted LOL I HAVE to know they get off the island and Jack and Nell surely end up together ;) I can't seem to stop reading....! I have read many of the POTC stories here on aff, including Hils and AniSparrow's, and in my opinion...you guys are the 'cream of the crop!' Keep up the good work....and keep posting chapters ;) he he he
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story. i started reading a few months ago, and now that your updating regularly im excited to see it through. your wrighting is so expresive and your charecters have such personality.
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story - please keep updating!!! We need even more!!!
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
Thank you for posting more, I really enjoy reading your work! Poor Nell, although I imagine in a similar situation I'd probably go insane (or jump on the nearest attractive, dashing pirate!)
Please post more!
Thank you for posting more, I really enjoy reading your work! Poor Nell, although I imagine in a similar situation I'd probably go insane (or jump on the nearest attractive, dashing pirate!)
Please post more!
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uhm... is it done? does the story end here? i wasn't quite sure with the comment that you left at the bottom, maybe i overlooked something?
Anyways, i gotta say i have been following your story for quite a while and was always delighted to see updates :D i absolutley love your story and couldn't get enough of it!!
nell and jack are very cute together, i must say and it had me grinning a lot of times.
(aw, she is so naiiv! ^^ but v.sweet)
anyways! i'm sure i'll be reading it one more time (if this is the end) lol, im slightly confused by myself now.. uh... what i intended to say was: GOOD JOB! keep going!
kate
Anyways, i gotta say i have been following your story for quite a while and was always delighted to see updates :D i absolutley love your story and couldn't get enough of it!!
nell and jack are very cute together, i must say and it had me grinning a lot of times.
(aw, she is so naiiv! ^^ but v.sweet)
anyways! i'm sure i'll be reading it one more time (if this is the end) lol, im slightly confused by myself now.. uh... what i intended to say was: GOOD JOB! keep going!
kate