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for Never Wanted This

by emmaelf

person Kari
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the few actually good fics that are on this site. congrats. i know this is a lot to ask, but do you think that you could email me when you update. i don't visit this site unless i have to. there are things i'd rather not read here, ya know?
person Shara Nesu
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More of this fic please, it's sooooo good. That last chapter with Jack dealing with Will - so emotionally charged with depth and everything! Really enjoying this story - write more! *beg* Thanks for sharing.
person Anon
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH! I thought that last chapter was fantastic! I loved the way Jack went about showing Will that it wasn't his fault. I loved it! The whole story too, in fact.
person Zoe
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM

It just keeps getting better. Thank you for updating so quickly!
person Kelli
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sits by computer and waits for next chapter*
person Kelli
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... these chapters just keep getting better. Either time really goes by faster when reading a good story, or this chapter was a little shorter than the ones before. Eh... I don't know. All I know is that I can't wait for more.
person Klink
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Tis a bloody good read as always!
person Serenity
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
UGH! YOU SUCK DUDE! WHY MUST YOU END IT WITH A CLIFFIE? WHY IN BLOODY HELL? IT WAS GETTING SO GOOD BUT THEN YOU HAD TO GO AND RUIN IT BY ENDING IT! YOU BETTER GET OUT ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON OR I WILL PERSONALLY COME THROUGH YOUR COMPUTER AND SMACK YOU IN THE FACE THRICE! by the way this was excellent and brilliant as always. you really rock dude.
person Becky
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah, poor Will. *pets author*
person Jack4Turner
schedule September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww

Good chapter....wish it was longer :) Poor Will it is going to take him a long time to heal. And poor Elizabeth she really wants to see him. Ah well thats to bad for her...mashe she can sneak in on him while he is sleeping or something just so she can sit and watch him as he breaths. Jack is really going to have to show his true strips and help Will a lot through the next few chapters. And Norrington...well truth be told I would have loved to see his face as well....In fact I would have loved to see his face just because he had to rely on a pirate to help take Port Royal back :) Well anyways...hurry and help Will get through this....just not to fast okay? Will angst with helpful Jack is just to cute...wouldnt' want it to end too soon:)