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for Never Wanted This

by emmaelf

person Zoe
schedule September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM

Hi again - just wanted to say that I love the new chapters - have reread the last chapter several times already, and I just keep liking Jack's rescue! Thanks for updating so quickly...
person Moi
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is mind-blowingly awesome. We had the hurt; now onto the comfort! Jack! Will!
person cat4556
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am in shock...... All that I can muster up to say is, beutifully written my ffriend. Beautifully written.
person Jack4Turner
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo Will is free at long last! :)
But is he really free? He is going to really need some gentle and careing love for a while...
With Jacks help though he should be able to find the peace that he deserves. :)
Post soon! Can't wait to find out what happens next.
person Beth
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, Varga's dead! ::does little dance:: About time that crazy, arrogant punk died...... But I have a distinct feeling that things still arent' going to look up for Will yet.. I just hope that Jack can provide comfort for him now... Eagerly waiting more!
person Shara Nesu
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was Amazing!!! Jack saved Will *Yay* Err...any comforting coming soon *grin*. Fabulous Chapter! Can't wait for no 7 - get those hot little fingers typing! Pretty please, with sweet Jack on top.
person Anty
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy this - glorious doses of Will abuse, angst, and torture... *happy sigh* Unfortunately I have to agree with you on a J/W romance being beside the point. Though I suppose there's always the option of Jack being a VERY good friend and Will asking to be touched in kindness before he's able to face and touch Elizabeth again... Keep up the good writing!! Anty =)
person Kelli
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... oh my gosh. I printed off the chapters so far and I read them during my math class. Then I came back and found that the story had been updated. Yay!
I feel so bad for Will. I usually don't like stories that are very graphic, but you do it tastefully and the story wouldn't be the same without it. Keep up the good work and please update soon!
person Pookie
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg, how did I miss reading this bit?!

that was... oy, I don't know the words I want!

Varga is a very... clever and devious man... hope those drugs don't get used to often!

how much is too much aphrodisac? (yes, I know I spelled that wrong) I didn't know there was a limit..

but hey, Varga's men are happy now :p

and if the drugs start getting out of Will's system, he'll be sore... but sated :p

can't wait for more! Update soon please!
person Serenity
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this piece of work is sheer brilliance. its simply amazing. great, and i say it again GREAT work!