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September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very very good. More please.
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September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderfully written story - Varga's just the villain one would love and hate.
Just a question though, will there be any J/W slash in the upcoming chapters? I'm a sucker for J/W and was hoping to see some in this y...y...
Just a question though, will there be any J/W slash in the upcoming chapters? I'm a sucker for J/W and was hoping to see some in this y...y...
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September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Please don't be too rough on Will. Please continue
One thing I noticed (This is not a flame) was that you wrote chapter 6 when I thing it should say chapter 5, might be a good ides to check.
One thing I noticed (This is not a flame) was that you wrote chapter 6 when I thing it should say chapter 5, might be a good ides to check.
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September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Kind to Will? Hah. You write what you want. Hope you update soon. Can't wait to see how it turns. Be.
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September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!
but why "chapter six"? is it chapter 5?
but why "chapter six"? is it chapter 5?
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September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just followed your link from Fanfinction.net, mainly cos i was going crazy with suspiscion! Thnk god you continued, but you know, you *Can*t tht this on fanfiction.net. I've seen a lot worse on there, lemme tell you. Yours is pretty mild in comparison! Plus,
“Captain, *Captain* Sparrow,”
I LOVED that bit!!! hehe
~~*Spirit*~~
“Captain, *Captain* Sparrow,”
I LOVED that bit!!! hehe
~~*Spirit*~~
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September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoa...That was...kind of disturbing lol. So Will didn't realize there was something going on? In the back of his mind I would think he would wonder. Those drugs left him.. eep! LOL. Can that be considered non-con? I mean yes he was drugged, but....*shrugs* Can he ever even heal after all this?
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September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG
Poor Will!!!!! Being passed around like that...you ought to be ashamed of yourself. Torturing the boy like that. Passing him around. Shameful!
And were is Jack? Isn’t the good captain supposed to rescue Will? Hurry and make that happen so the suffering can stop.
Excellent story so far…you have a fan in me. :) Keep up the excellent writing.
Poor Will!!!!! Being passed around like that...you ought to be ashamed of yourself. Torturing the boy like that. Passing him around. Shameful!
And were is Jack? Isn’t the good captain supposed to rescue Will? Hurry and make that happen so the suffering can stop.
Excellent story so far…you have a fan in me. :) Keep up the excellent writing.
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September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
God, I love this fic! I must confess that I really love to see my favourite characters suffer. ^^;;; I hope to see many more updates, but please, don't end the fic too soon! You have a great style and it's a very enjoyable read. Keep it up!
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September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I rarely feel compelled to review anything but this story has to be the grossest, most deplorable, most painful to read fic that I have ever read. Never before has someone pushed a fictional character to the limits of sexual insanity and wanton. I love it. How you describe the mental abuse of Will is excellent. And Varge is definately someone I would kill if I were Will, Liz or Jack. Keep it coming...ehehe Mind the pun.