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Wow, very exciting! I can't wait to see how this turns out. Update, girl, update!

OMG!!! This is the best story. I was horror struck in the 2nd chapter but now I am overjoyed that Jack is coming to save Will. Please don't hurt Will too much in the next chapter. I know its just fantasy but these days I can't look into Orli's eyes and not think of a story like this. UPGRADE SOOOON!!!

Good story. Please finish soon. Don't be too rough of Will, though. He is the main character

ARGHHH!!! where's the next chapter!!! Please oh for heaven's sake post no5. I can't take the tension!!! When's Jack going to find Will! Please, *begging* post soon. Oh...and this is such a astiastic fic!

Loveing the story sooo much - and though I'm screaming over Will's predicment, this latest chapter was fantastic! I like the bargaining and the compromises, loe Jack and Elizabeth, and you paint a very realistic Commodore. Which is not to say I'm hop hopping over what poor Will is going through, so I'm going to join everyone else in the "Argh! More, more! PLEASE....." refrain. I love it!

write more soon! i want them to save Will! i want to know more about varga(the bastard)! don't forget to tell me when you update, or i won't be able to tell you how great your story is!

Any chance of throwing in a little Jack torture while you're at it?

that was amazing! i really like where this story is going in terms of literature. as for subject matter, it makes me cry. although that can be seen as a good thing because this is one of far too few things that have made me FEEL. all in all, you deserve many kudos.

What a horrible way to leave young Will suffering so. Poor boy being subjected to that uncomfort all the while waiting for you to hurry up and post the next chapter so he can be relieved (or not) and what of Jack when is Jack going to arrive and save poor Will of his torment. Jack should slice Varga head off with his sword for all the stuff that that wacko has done to little Will. Please hurry and update I don't know how long I'm going to be able to wait to find out what happens. I'm really enjoying your story so far and the way that I see it, it's just going to keep getting better and better as it goes on. So please hurry :)

Great story! Sigh, poor Will. I'll get my friends to kill that Spanish b*****d