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that was so good. sure i'm over here crying for will, but it was still so bloody GOOD....::sigh:: smashing story, just make sure you put will back together after you break him ::sniff::

This novel is very interesting. It is very glad if it updates early.

Great chapter. It was nice and long and you updated quickly. I am both pleased and impressed. you're a very talented writer. Poor Will, I have a feeling he's scarred for life. I love Varga's character. So despicable, and yet so brilliant! You had better update again soon, I don't think Will can take having his manhood bound much longer...

This is one damn good story you hve going on here. Got me right hooked when I read it. All the good stuff, kink, Will angst and domineering Vargas. Usually dun like OC but your Vargas was done pretty realistically, wicked, possesive, domineering and loves to play games, poor Will but hehe I do love a suffering Will, the more the husweesweeter the comfort when it comes. The bit with the string's highly original, poor Will gonna have a difficult time no matter what he believes. Commends on the slashy bits too, just nice, not too overdone with the violence, just right, it's not easy achieving the graphic tone, hehe though it can go a bit further without being extreme. Though prehaps yon iln illustrate Vargas looks? We know his char but not his appearance, sometimes I am left wondering how he looks like..he may be a small guy but has overwhelming strength or even a normal looking dude, but twisted by power...not all the leaders are handsome looking dudes they have in fanfic. haha if u are looking to play it real. Hm..We know how much Will hates Vargas, but what does Vargs feels? Pretty can explore what Vargas is thinking, of coz lust, the heady power feeling but it doesnt really explain the possessiveness, unless that is a game too, to further torture Will or like a fav toy to keep near? even though he doesnt sitck to one person.

Also loved Varga's wi, the dialogue was good esp the first chapter esp Vargas. His arrogance just shows off th Heh Hehe it would be interesting when Jack and him meets. Jacks probably totally infuriates him. Hmm..would there be any slash bwt Jack and Will? K of of their supporter, but if there isnt, it understandable.. Hehe you should do more fics and post them, you are really a good author. And if its the potc universe, all the better for us fans ;) So dun be afraid if anyone hates you neh, afterall this is adult fanfiction and if anyone dun likes it, they can just stop reading. After all, none of these are real. So looking forward to the next chapter as always, and keep those 'games' coming!

I, for one, will never complain about gratuitous cruelty in a slash fic. >_> I love angst and character-torture. If that makes me a sick person or something, then I guess I'm sick. ^^;;; I actually really like this fic because you're not glossing over the details. Details are good! It's a horrible situation that Will is in, and you're portraying it wonderfully. I can't wait to read more of your Will-torture!

you'd better email me when you update this! if you don't, i won't forgive you.

*lets out a long whoosh of breath* Poor Will! Even being a die hard Jack fan... I couldn't help but love how well you've done this story for Will! *shakes his head in pity* You're breaking him! Beautifully done! I really hope Elizabeth and Jack can rescue him as your summary stated... Please, update soon!!!

Holy shit that's a good story, pleaseate ate

Oh wow..... That's one of the most griping rape scenes I've read in a long time.... I could feel Will's pain and fear right through the computer screen, and ::shudders:: Varga must be absolutely and completely insane. I'm curious to know what has happened to Elizabeth and the others, and see what happens to Will. I hope that what ever happens to Will, Varga gets whats coming to him.

OMG, this story is fucking great! I love it! You're an unbelievable writer, and I can't *wait* for the next part!

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