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August 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the first and only time I've felt inspired enough to review any POTC fanfic, or indeed anything at all on this site, but I HAD to review this one. God. You HAVE to continue. You HAVE to. There'll be lynch mobs at your door if you don't.
I love the concept, and it is very well written. I can't point out any specifics in this review, as I was lost in the moment when reading it (to me the sign of a really good fic). But, if you ever feel you want a beta reader, or just a second opinion, I'd be more than happy to try to beta your stories. Specifically this one!! It's been a while since I wrote any fanfic myself, but I do have a decent working knowledge of the English language - and a keen interest in slash.
Can't wait for the next instalment. This is really fab stuff.
BTW, ve tve to say this, but as soon as I saw the movie, I figured Will as bottom in a BDSM relationship (although probably not in a consensual manner without a lot of persuasion and a lot of time to get used to the idea - he is, after all, Mr Naivity). Thanks a million for playing with this concept. The question now is, does Jack know this person (yes, surely?), and what will happen when Jack and Elizabeth finally do rescue Will? I'm thinking Elizabeth is somehow not going to be enough for Will anymore.
Jaye
I love the concept, and it is very well written. I can't point out any specifics in this review, as I was lost in the moment when reading it (to me the sign of a really good fic). But, if you ever feel you want a beta reader, or just a second opinion, I'd be more than happy to try to beta your stories. Specifically this one!! It's been a while since I wrote any fanfic myself, but I do have a decent working knowledge of the English language - and a keen interest in slash.
Can't wait for the next instalment. This is really fab stuff.
BTW, ve tve to say this, but as soon as I saw the movie, I figured Will as bottom in a BDSM relationship (although probably not in a consensual manner without a lot of persuasion and a lot of time to get used to the idea - he is, after all, Mr Naivity). Thanks a million for playing with this concept. The question now is, does Jack know this person (yes, surely?), and what will happen when Jack and Elizabeth finally do rescue Will? I'm thinking Elizabeth is somehow not going to be enough for Will anymore.
Jaye
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August 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU FOR CHAP. 2
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August 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I thought that second chapter was great! That spanish guy is a bastard! I feels so bad for Will! But the story is fantastic!
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August 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is so good! Very unique with the spanish invaders. Varga sounds evil, poor Will. Update soon!
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August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, very dark, but I like it.
Poor Will, feeling so responcible for it all, and condamning himself to the life of a slave.
Please continue
Poor Will, feeling so responcible for it all, and condamning himself to the life of a slave.
Please continue
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August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It seems very interesting.
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August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, you certainly have my attention on this story now... and I think you have carved out a pretty cool villian! Please update soon!
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August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More please, and soon!
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August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg, this is so neat!
such a sacrifice Will is making to keep his friends and family safe!
and who doesn't like Will angst?!
I can't wait for more!
please update soon!
such a sacrifice Will is making to keep his friends and family safe!
and who doesn't like Will angst?!
I can't wait for more!
please update soon!
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August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting beginning! I think this fic hol lot lot of promise. ^_^ I'm a sucker for character torture fics. ^_^;;; And this is quite the intriguing premise you have set up here, too. I look forward to reading more!