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November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great to see some nc-17 stories based on horror movies. Can't tell you how sick I am of all this Lord of the Rings crap...
This is well written and manages to keep everyone in good character (I'm glad Lori's hcuz cuz I surprisingly liked her character. She seemed to have a rapport with him at end when she watches him sink into the lake). Interesting theory on Jason being a normal kid. Problem is we've seen him alive, both as a kid and adult, and he *is* actually deformed (to different degrees depending on which movie). Still, this is a Freddy vs Jason fic so I think it can slide. And you sure made Freddy a sadistic bastard here, I love it. Hope the next chapter comes out soon.
Just one thing: PLEASE work on your paragraphing. It's a real eyesore to stare at this big mass of crowded text on screen.
This is well written and manages to keep everyone in good character (I'm glad Lori's hcuz cuz I surprisingly liked her character. She seemed to have a rapport with him at end when she watches him sink into the lake). Interesting theory on Jason being a normal kid. Problem is we've seen him alive, both as a kid and adult, and he *is* actually deformed (to different degrees depending on which movie). Still, this is a Freddy vs Jason fic so I think it can slide. And you sure made Freddy a sadistic bastard here, I love it. Hope the next chapter comes out soon.
Just one thing: PLEASE work on your paragraphing. It's a real eyesore to stare at this big mass of crowded text on screen.
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is good!! please update i want to see what's next!! ^.^
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October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THEIR MOLESTING HIM!!?? THOSE BASTARDS!
THEY SHOULD DIE-DIE-DIE!!!!!!
THEY SHOULD DIE-DIE-DIE!!!!!!
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October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Quit tormenting me with these cliffhangers! >< But seriously, as i've said this is a very good fic, and very well written. It gets very deep into these peoples' lives, gives them a little more character. Again, excellent story. Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh, this is such an interesting story! Please please PLEASE continue! *sad puppy eyes* I check for an update nearly everyday cause I am REALLY digging this fic! ^__^
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September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
YOU HAVE TOOOOOOO!!!!!!
YOU HAVE TOOOOOOO!!!!!!
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September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think your story's great! It's full of fantasticness and....weeeeee! Write more please, and soon!