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for Certainly Unexpected

by Colimbina

person Kathy
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. Most slash stories seem to jump right to "the act" which usually ends up being the same old thing most of the time. I liked the slow "courtship" and seduction that made up most of this story. It just felt “real”… and was sexy as hell.
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I think you capture Wills shyness and curiosity really well. And you have a knack for writing Jack!
person Lain Liffith
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've loved this story for a long time now. I was wondering if I could ask you to post it on a community on live journal for specific Jack/Will? It's just gotten started but this story would be wonderful to add. Just a thought.
person Willow
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*pokes* Update! Want more! My sister and I got our favourite saying from this, "Oh my god! You're a pirate!" Most amusing. Not to mention that you write wonderfully and I love the way it's all playing out and Will and Jack together, so hot. So perfect. God I love you. Wr Write! I'll lend you my muses if you want. *pets Will/Jack muses* Yes, well. Get on with it! Tally ho.
person Sarryn
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is utterly delightful. I hope you will update soon. Wonderful!
person Willow
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh just fantastic. It's all very... fantastic! Best word ever. ^_^ Your fic is great, love it far. You write exceptionally well, and I did like the lack of author's notes. They get annoying at the beginning of EVERY CHAPTER, know what I mean? I thank you for that. I think you did a wonderful job, and do encourage a continuation. ^_^

Slashyness! Pirate style!
-Willow
person nightfang
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*is panting* ^_^ hehe. write more please!!!!!!
person Sanomi
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hah! Awesome! Actually BELIEVABLE pirate smut! yaayyyy! :D
person Ankhsattva
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
... I'm utterly speechless.

Wait, no, I'm not. Of all the lemon scenes I can remember reading, this is without a doubt the best I've ever read (and I'm slightly ashamed to admit I've read quite a few..). You're a genius.
person Zoe
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM

Have given cat many extra cuddles. He forgives you. I think he might have done anyway, though, as I'm always in such a good mood after reading your story that he gets everything he w for for hours!
Loved the new part, loved how Jack is going so slow with Will, and wholeheartedly intend to patiently fret whilst waiting for the next instalment! Thanks again!