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oh, this is so good! I mean, this is the best PotC fic I've read! you portray the characters perfectly! I imagine Jack is a hard character to write, but you've done a perfect job ^_^ And you're very talented with the lemons too. I hope to see more updates soon ^_^

-yorda

Good story so far. Poor Will, he's so confused about.....everything basically.

I SOOOO LOVE your fic. This is one of those rare fics that doesn't corrupt their characterizations, in other words... THEY'RE NOT OOC.
Very good mix of Humor and Romance too, with a little dash of Angst. And your Jack Sparrow is CUTE!!!
I also loved Will's thoughts about sex, and what his mother told him about it. That was SO funny!
I hope you continue this fic yours, MORE SOON! Please?

Stupid aff.net! DIE! *pulls out mallet and pounds aff.net into an unidentifiable mess of virtual goo* Take that, bitch! Sorry if this review (or one very similar to it) comes up twice, but for some reason when I was right in the middle of reviewing, the stupid website booted me off! God! *stomps on the gooey puddle once more for good measure*

Wow... I can't recall ever annoying an author after every new chapter the way I've done here. Well, it's your own fault, you know, for being so damn cool. (Heh heh... uber geek. Reminds me of those "The Nerds" movies, back in the day... ooh, non-sequitir.) And don't say it's bad, 'cause it's great--especially since you're still building up to the full-blown (okay, waaay bad pun, but I *swear* I didn't intend that) pirate sex. Right now we're just in pirate smut land, which is very nummy and drool-worthy. I'm one a'those people who likes the slash to slowly progress, ya know? It's better that way. ^.^ Good things come to thwho who wait and all that... Besides, to repeat *so* many others, you're the best, in my humble little opinion, at keeping the characters in character, and I think Will's behaving spot-on. And Jack's r, he, he does seem the prudish type. ^.-

Now, I must away, to prepare the virgin sacrifices that must be made in tribute to thy divine--oops, I've said too much. Ignore that! Just the way you're ignoring the creepy altar to your left that's dedicated to you and surrounded with shrunken heads and tallow candles... Man, I did it again. Balls.

Wonderful story! I really love how you kept up the UST between Will and Jack for so long, making Will practically beg for it before Jack would do anything. Seeing Will so innocent is hot, but knowing that Jack wants to do a bit of corrupting of that innocence is just scortching! Speaking of which, I do hope the next part comes along soon because I want to read a lot more of Jack "educa" W" Will. *G*

I really, really loved this story. 'Tis good to see a completely innocent Will for once. Jack sexy as hell as always. You have to write more, savvy? :p

I LOVE your fic and i can´t wait to read the next part so please, post it soon

You're damned right I wanna kill you. Hurry and get the next part out to us cause I wanna see/read Jack show Will just how high he can fly! *snigger* Yummy great work.

Earen

I've liked your story a great deal, so much so in fact that this is the first one I've reviewed. While I personally didn't think of that kind of relationship between Jack and Will when I saw the movie I find the idea interesting. Your portrayal of Jack is spot-on and I'm looking forward to your next installment. I'm just curious about when we'll find out what's going on in Jack's head. :-)

First of all, this fic must be the BEST fic in this fandom I've read so far... And I've read almost every piece I could find
Your fic has style and somehow the characters just fit... I just simplve tve the way you write the relationship between J&W and well all I can say, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
with admiration
beltsu