alls fair in love and war

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I am looking for a beta reader please leave a reveiw with your email if are willing. please review with pointers and advice all constructive critism is very appreciated. im new to this and want to be able to write fan fiction to a high standard

Ursula stood by the bar of The Merchant’s Inn trying to look as appealing as possible, there had been a fierce storm the night before and business was slow. Her eyes began to glaze over as her concentration wavered and she was caught unaware when two hands swept across her waist. She jumped as her daydream was abruptly disturbed but soon relaxed when she came baown own to reality. ‘What can I do you for sir?’ she said surductivaly as she turned round, shock and delight spread across her face as she saw the deep eyes of Captain Jack Sparrow stare at her. Jack lowered his mouth to her ear
‘I’m afraid I’m entertaining love’ he whispered into her ear and pod tod to a group of men at a table ‘why don’t you get us a room and ill be up shortly’. Ursula made her way up the stairs that lead to the rooms and found one that was not already occupied. She sat down on the bed and kicked her feet with anticipation. ‘I’ve been longing for this for so long so why do I feel so unsatisfied’ she thought ‘Why didn’t he sweep me of my , ca, carry me here and ravish me. He has company but that has never stopped him before’. Ursula sat there waiting, waiting for what she had already waited for six months for to feel him in her arms.

Jack proceeded to tell the men tales of his last adventure, the battle they fought, the gold they captured and the woman he met. ‘Now tell me Jack, what kind of woman does it take to snag the infamous womaniser that you are’ Lynette the landlady asked as she passed eavesdroppon ton there conversation.
‘The type that knows how to snag a pirate’
‘Aye’ she said. Jack suddenly remembered Ursula waiting upstairs for him. ‘Why did I tell her to get a room for us, why did I greet her? Bad habits I suppose’ Jack thought ‘Well I can’t leave her there waiting’ with this Jack excused himself from the table and made his way to the left of the bar. He stopped as he approached the double doors that led to the stairs ‘I have to do this, I couldn’t leave her waiting. I’ll just explain the situation, pay her and leave. Why did I come here?’ he went up the stairs and wondered which room she was he saw that a door to his right was ajar so he looked through the gap. He stood there watching her, sitting patiently for him.

It took a lot of strength to open that door but he did. Jack opened his mouth to speak but before he could Ursula had started caressing him. He froze with fear that he would break his promise, Ursula up buttoned his shirt and began to kiss his well-toned chest. She knew something had changed in him why wasn’t he responding to her ‘I don’t know why but I know better then any other woman how to pleasure him’ she thought to herself. Ursula knelt down on her knees and unzipped his trousers kissing down from his stomach to his groin. Jack tried to speak but could only stutter when the pleasure of Ursulas’s mouth filled him. As he tried hard to take control of himself the sensations spread across his body and contained him, he hands spread to her hair which he caressed and embedded his satisfaction in as he lent his body against the wall behind him for support. Ursula knew it was working and the satisfaction that his pleasure in her gave her assured her that she had not lost him yet. She moved down to his balls, which she licked and tantalised before taking one in her mouth and sucking. Ursula moved back up to his penis while still massaging his balls with her hand. Jack let out a groan of pleasure as he filled her mouth with his liquid. He stood there as Ursula went to the bathroom soon the guilt came to him as the reality of what had just happened hit him. He had broken his promise to the woman he loved and to himself.