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The Bitches Must Pay

By: SpikeSpiegel
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Rating: Adult ++
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The Bitches Must Pay

The Bitches Must Pay!

By Spike Spiegel

Disclaimer and Spoiler Alert! Kate here is just going to get down right disgusting. If you are a Lumiya Fan (Does she actually have any? Just kidding, um, maybe not.)or a Star Wars fan that doesn’t want to see humiliation, bestiality, torture, monster sex, Demon Sex, more bestiality, or raping tentacles, S&M, visions of Hell, Orochimaru sympathizing, swearing, corn raping, Anko and Orochimaru doing it on Jacen's bloodied corpse (That could be a joke.), stuff inspired by that heavy metal show on Adult Swim, and demon births in Star Wars, turn back now. If you had read Sacrifice already, you can read it, but if you didn’t, stay away until you read the book. Or if you hate and despise the Star Wars EU read it anyway, if you want too. Curiosity is a magnificent thing isn’t it? Come on, you know you want to! Mara fans, don't ya want to see ya girl avenged?

But if you want to see Lumiya get her punishment in Hell and Jacen to be slashed, strangled, and slaughtered, beaten, stabbed, and crushed, garotted, and impaled, shot and executed without mercy! (Yes, I got that from Dirge of Cerberus.) Also violated by corn, tortured and killed every possible way, getting kicked in the balls, peed on by a drunken Ryuk, and having two naked ninja hump on his corpse!

That’s it folks, now it’s punishment time!


Lumiya, the Dark Lady of the Sith, a vile cybernetic piece of shit that was once a human female named Shira Brie laid dead in a cave. Oh how fitting for that piece of crap. Her head was lying a few inches away from her body; Grand Master Luke Skywalker had lopped it off. "I can't believe that I had you as a girlfriend! What the fuck was I thinking!" Well, that's what she got for the killing of his wife Mara. Although, Lumiya didn’t kill Mara, she was responsible though. Although, the one who casts judgment among the dead, let's call her Queen Yun decided to toss her worthless ass into Hell for all the vile things she had done in the past.

But before she took the happy trip to Hell, she was to stand before a jury of 3 people she knew. She was to be given The Baseball Test. If three people she knew liked her, she'd go to to the afterlife. But if the 3 people struck her out, she'd be sent to Hell.

Anakin Skywalker crossed his arms and shouted; "I'm not your master, I won't save you, I should have let you die. I'm such a retard! I'm a big fat retard! So just do me a favor and go to Hell!"

Mara Skywalker who was dressed as a Death God/Soul Reaper like the one who has the big boobs snorted; "You ruined my life, I'll never get to see my son grow up, I'll never fuck Luke until he dies, and you had to tell that idiot Jacen about the stupid Sith. So do us all a favor and go to Hell you bitch!"

Flint, a former dark lord who turned to good, only to get killed by her. "You suck and you sucked in bed too! Go to Hell you big ugly cunt!"

"There you have it Shira, stupid skank! Three strikes and yer out! You're going straight to Hell!" Queen Yun in all her glory sent that good for nothing piece of trash to Hell and the crowd cheered.

Lumiya was stripped of her powers, her cybernetic parts, and such. She was dirty and naked, that meant she was defenseless against anything that came her way. She was now among the lost in Hell. It was cold and filthy there was nothing but darkness, fire, and smog. She walked along jagged rocks, hearing the cries of lost souls. Her green eyes scanned for familiar faces or creatures that wanted to eat her soul or just wanted her pussy. Suddenly she heard something slimy coming towards her pretty quickly. Behind her was a gelatinous green demon that seemed to be in the shape of a one eyed octopus. She looked at it and smirked. “What is that thing going to do to me, I may have no weapons or powers, but I can kick its butt.”

"Such an arrogant slut you are!" The demon said, "You will be perfect here in Hell."

Lumiya snorted; "Oh, so what are you going to do with me?"

"I'm gonna make you mah bitch!" The demon laughed as his tentacles shot out, two around her wrists, two around her legs, one around her waist.

Lumiya was pinned against a rock wall, her legs spread open wide. "No! What are you doing! I'm the dark lady of the Sith, you release me at once!"

"Fuck off you worthless whore! We don't care who the fuck you are! Now it's time to shut your fucking mouth!" The demon forced another tentacle into her mouth and down her throat, filling it with foul disgusting slime. "Suck it! Suck it and enjoy it you scunt!"

Lumiya had no choice but to swallow it, it was dreadfully disgusting. The demon suddenly opened it's mouth and it's long icky tongue started stroking her body, covering her in saliva. The tongue massaged her breasts, then went down to her pussy where he began to lick it. Lumiya spat out the tentacle in her mouth and screamed; "No! Stop it! Stop it!" Lumiya wanted to cry, she was being broken slowly, but surely.

"You taste pretty good." The demon said as he withdrew his tongue. "This will please my brethren very much. You see when male dark Jedi come down here, they are punished to roam in this darkness, also they get the usual fire and brimstone every hour, also a good pitchfork to the ass when needed. But when a dark lady comes down here, she is tortured, humiliated, violated, and impregnated. Yes, new demons are born every day to punish those who do evil."

Lumiya's eyes widened, she did not want to be the mother of this thing or any things offspring. "No! No! I will not be used as a toy for your enjoyment! Release me at once!"

"Mmm, such fire, we'll like that a lot down here." The demon touched her face and coaxed her. "Oh don't worry it won't be so bad, you'll get used to it after a while, soon it will be like an ordinary routine."

Within seconds the demon whipped out two huge erect penis-like tentacles that were filled with hot sticky glowing green fluid. Lumiya closed her eyes as the tentacles entered her anus and vagina. His seed was burning hot and it flowed into her womb. Her stomach began to glow green and she felt the tentacles slide in and out of slowly. Then the demon started to speed up, she was screaming in pain as her insides were being tortured. Her orgasms were loud and she started to cum bright green. "That's it you little cunt, louder!" The demon's tongue lapped up her cum with delight. "You taste so sweet, I'm going to tell my friends how sweet and easy you are. We are going to have a good time with you!"

Lumiya screamed once more and passed out, the demon withdrew his tentacles and left her in a puddle of his semen and slime. "Oh what a pity and I wanted to have some more fun with you. You were good, now my lady there will be more demons to come."

Lumiya awoke a few minutes after the demon had gone, her insides hurt and she found her belly bight green and swollen. She felt something or somethings growing inside of her. Her skin got green and slimey, tentacles grew out of her body, she was turning into something like that demon. She shivered as she suddenly lost her humanity, actually, she was just losing her mind, it was just a hellish illusion. She was pretty normal physically, but totally fucked up mentally. Suddenly she started to go into labor, then she began to push. A huge glob of greenish yellow goo was ejected from her vagina. Milk leaked from her normal breasts that grew pretty large. Lumiya screamed as she saw small wriggling octopus-like demons crawling out of her. She couldn't take it anymore, so she just passed out as the young demons quietly suckled from her.

That was pretty short, but I need to torture Lumiya some more, heh heh.
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