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Angelus Vs. Riddick "The Ghostination" (REVISED)

By: shivingdeep
folder M through R › Pitch Black
Rating: Adult +
Chapters: 33
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Disclaimer: I do not own the movie that this fanfiction is written for, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Chapter 11

CHAPTER 11/32

Across the way, Kelly saw a breathtaking glowing silvery ball. It emitted silvery lights all around the globe. It seemed to be the exact same lights that emitted from Cordy’s eyes during her vision of Jack. It was very faint yet visible. Everyone stood in awe of the glow before them.

"Beautiful,” was all Riddick could conjure up.

"That’s It...That’s Where Jack Is!!" That’s exactly what I saw in my vision," Cordy said.

As they walked down the path, they realized that a structure was inside the glowing ball. Whatever this was…. it sure was massive. It covered most of the terrain in da woods. They eased on a down the shined-slicked-road and got a better look of what lied ahead. There was a gigantic silver statue of a man holding chains. This exquisite piece of sculpture stood at least 500 feet high. A few feet away stood a huge mansion. It seemed to stand at least 5 stories high. They examined the statue from the base all the way to the tiptop.

Angel boldly walked up to it and got better acquainted. There was a silver plaque framed with thick silver chains. He caressed his fingers over the inscription on the plaque. It read:

"Welcome to The Shinning. Prepare to get your shine on. In honor of our beloved Master Shine.”

He left the company of the statue to fellowship with the others. He told them what the inscription had said. He also told them that he’d never heard of this "Master Shine." Wes confessed that not even the book he had read mentioned him either.

"Who The Hell Is This Shine Freak And What Does He Want With My…Uh…Jack?" Riddick growled out.

Angel gestured for them to keep strolling. Before they reached the mansion, a melody of a chant hindered them from their "Jack Quest." There were several uniformed guards marching around the mansion chanting "All We Owe…We Owe Shine."

Everyone busted up laughing so hard but struggled to keep their sounds of laughter down as they hid. Riddick just growled loudly and hid with the others.

DEV’S IN DEEP

DeeepToothDev hid behind a tree this time. She waited until the crew started to mush on before she came out of hiding. She tried to see where Angel and his crew went, but to now avail. Now, it was her turn to jump over the moot. She saw how easy it was for them but still hesitated. She crept up to the moot making sure it was clear. She turned left then right. It seemed purrty damn clear to her. She cautiously jumped over the moot. Unfortunately, she didn’t quite make it.

One of those plants grabbed her leg and started pulling her down. She yanked her knife out of her left pant pocket. She cursed and yelled as she gutted the enraged plant. Orange goo squirted out as she was violently tossed to the other side of the moot. To her surprise, the plant actually grew two more heads. They charged at her furiously but didn’t quite reach her. She stood up and dusted herself off. After she composed herself, she continued on her "Angel quest."

BACK WITH JACK

Jack suddenly awoke with the name Riddick dripping from her tongue. (I know da feeling)
Damn, I could’ve sworn that I heard that deep gravelly voice of his calling my name, she thought. She turned to her immediate right to turn on the light. Before her hand touched the knob, it came on automatically. “Oh Bloody Hell, how did that happen?” Jack asked. Hmm maybe it’s a motion sensitive lamp, she thought.

"Did I just say "Bloody Hell? Oh Shazza, girl I miss you so much," Jack sighed out.

She tried to hold back her tears but lost the battle. She always kept a tissue box on the far end of her headboard. She glanced to her right and viola…there it was. She positioned her body so she could reach for it. She strained her arm as much as she could but couldn’t reach it. As her hand was stretched out towards the box, it began to violently shake. It then rose up and like a nail to magnets it floated in the nest of the palm of her hands.

"What the freakin’ hell just happened here? Ridddddick…where the hell are you?" Jack sobbed as she laid back down on the bed.


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