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Pirates of the Caribbean (All) › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
3
Views:
4,559
Reviews:
11
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Currently Reading:
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I do not own the Pirates of the Caribbean movie series, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
chapter 2
Title: Pirates of the Caribbean, Version 2 (2/?)
Category: Pirates of the Caribbean (movie)
Rating: PG-13
Warning: spanking
Co-written by carelesscat and tiaoconnell
Disclaimner: We don't own it even though we wish we did. We
just play with it
Summary: Scenes of Pirates of the Caribbean re-written to include
spanking!!
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Original Scene: The fight in the blacksmith shop between Jack Sparrow and Will Turner
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Jack is running around staying out of the way of Norrington and his men. He jumps inside the Blacksmith's shop when he sees some of Norrington's men. He notices the sleepng Mr. Brown and tries to wake him but to no avail. he decides to find something to pry the irons off and uses a metal prod to spur the donkey so that the irons break.
It's then he hears the door start to open after he gets the irons off and heads for cover. Will enters and calms the poor donkey, but notices the hat, ignoring the drunk man on the floor. However, it was the hammer that got his attention. "Not where I left you..." he muttered to hismelf.
Will walks over to the hat and almost touches it, then someone, holding a sword, catches his attention. "You're the one they are hunting," he said slowly. "The pirate"
"You seem somewhat familiar. Have I threatened you before?" Will gave a skeptical look. "I make a point of avoiding familiarity with pirates!" he announced with pride. "Ah well, then it would be a shame to put a black mark on your record. So, if you'll excuse me..." he says turning away and starts to leave.
Will draws a sword and points it at Jack in an expert fashion.
"Do you think this wise, boy - crossing blades with a pirate?" Jack asked drawing his own sword.
"You threatened Miss Swann!" he said darkly, his features filled with anger. Jack smiles and runs his sword up and down Will's sword, "Only a little."
They begin to sword fight among the hanging swords, until Will throws his own sword into the door, barring Jack's exit with a smug look.
Jack tries the door but it is unsuccessful. He starts to walk back, "That...is a wonderful trick...except, once again you are between me and my way out. And now you have no weapon." he says smiling.
"Except one" Will fakes a kick to Jack's groin, making him jump away, dropping his sword in the process. "My strength" Will states as he dives on top of Jack. Jack rolls over on top of Will and says, "But you know nothing about pirates." he says and punches Will in the stomach
Will groans and clutches his stomach, rolling over to the side and smacking a table. Jack starts to move out of the way. Several empty glasses fall onto the floor, amking Jack dance out of the way of the glass and knock over several swords in the process. he grimaces when the banging and clanging of the swords hit the floor. he gets up and looks at Will.
Will staggers to his feet and lunges at Jack The pirate quickly moves out of the way. Will tumbled, grabbing Jack's shirt and ripping it on the process, and broke a table. Jack looked at his shirt and glared at Will, "that was MY best shirt." Will sat up from amid the pile of broken wood. "Oops" he said pishpishly, looking down.
Jack shook his head and dusted himself off. Will got up slowly."Sorry, didn't mean to do that. Was grabbing for your ass actually" he smirked, trying to toy with the pirate. It was his life's goal to make pirates utterly miserable whenever he had the chance.
Jack walked up to Will and backhanded him in the face. Will fell backwards, landing hard on his back with a moan, a little blood trickling from the side of his mouth. He looked at Jack, shocked and horrified "you should show manners towards me." he scolded.
"You---you hit me" he said, sniffling. He had never been hit before in that manner, and it really upset him, or so it seemed.
he looked down at Will and said, "sorry to hit you, but you should show better manners to me, boy." Will rubbed his now swollen lower lip. then Jack turned around to walk toward the door
Will rushed up behind Jack with part of the broken table and smacked him squarely across the backside with it Jack yelped and turned around looking at Will. Will smirked, still holding the piece of wood like one would hold a baseball bat
"you little brat. how dare you hit me like that." he said drawing his sword. "And why the bloody hell shouldn't I?" Will asked. Just then the drunk woke and smacked Jack over the head with his bottle of booze. The pirated fell over face first and Will laughed hysterically as Nogtongton's men entered a moment later.
"excellent work, Mr Brown.You've assisted in the capture of a dangerous fugitive."
"What the fuck? No way, I did that he was skunk drunk!" Will said with a stomp. Norrington looked angrily at Will, "hold your tongue, Mr. Turner." He stuck out his tongue at Norrington.
he looked at his men and said, "take Captain Sparrow to his cell...i have some business to take care of." he said looking back to Will. "Awww, looky my shop, wuhdid doys dys do?" the owner slurred.
Will gulped and took a step back. "Mr Brown...go and have a drink...i want to talk privately with young Mr Turner here." "Oh, drinky sounds Looooooooooovely" the man stumbled and staggered out of the shop
"Um---um---" Will said, his voice rather high-pitched. Norrington glared at Will. Will took several steps backwards. "Aren't you going to escort the pirate to the jail?" he squeaked
"No, Mr Turner...I'm going to deal with your attitude."
"What? Why?" he whined, sounding like a little boy.
"for you sudden outburst...that was very disrespectful." Norrington scolded.
"I didn't mean too" he said. "And that pirate hit me!" "it doesn't matter if HE hit you...i'm talking about that sudden outburst you did when i was TALKING to Mr Brown." he growled at Will.
Will's lower lip trembled and he backed away further, right into the door. There was no escape. "I'm sorry" he whispered, hanging his head. Norrington took off his sword from his hip and walked toward Will Will watched him with wide eyes, then ducked his head again
Norrington looked at him and said, "i'm not going to hurt you, Mr Turner." "Then what are you gonna do?" he asknot not looking up, swiping the blood from his mouth again. Norrington walked up and grabbed Will's arms, "i'm going to discipline you."
"No, I don't want a spanking!" Will shouted
he didn't say anything as he led Will to Mr Brown's tool table. "I'll be good, I promise, I'm really sorry"
Norrington brushed some of the tools off tab table and bent Will over it. Will squirmed to get away, but Norrington was a lot stronger then he looked. "I'll be good I swear!! Don't spank me please! I'm not a little kid!"
"Mr Turner...you ACTED like a little child...so you will be punished like one." he said as he started to take Will's pants down
"Hey, you can't do that! Stop that, right now!! noooooooooooo!" he howled as his backside was exposed to the cool
"i AM a lot older than you, Mr Turner." he said as he put his hand on Will's back
"But I don't want you too, I'm sorry, I am, I won't do it again!" "It's too late for that." Norrington said as he raised his other hand and brought it down hard on Will's backside SMACK "OWWW!"
SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK Will squirmed and tried to get away as large pink handprints appeared on his cheeks. "I'm sorry, I really am!!" he howled.
Norrington kept him still and said, "Why are you being punished?" he asked as he gave Will another spank SMACK
"for being rude!! OWW" WIll sniffled and put his face on the table under his arms. Norrington nodded and said, "Are you going to act like this again?" he asked as he gave him another hard spank on his sit spot SMACK
"No Sir! Oww, please stop, I'll be very good, I promise sir!"
"I hope you will be good...and to make sure..." as he said that he gave Will 2 extra hard spanks on his backside and sit spot SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK Will started to cry loudly
then he started to gently rub Will's back and said, "Mr Turner...didn't you ever get punished when you were living with your parents?"
"My father was gone so much" Will said softly through his tears. "And my mother only spanked me once, with my pants on,a nd then she cried and said she'd never do it again."
he sighed and said, "If you EVER do anything like this again...I'll be using my belt on your backside." Will broke into sobs "I didn't mean to be a bad boy" he sounded scared.
"It's alright, Mr. Turner...it's all over.
"
"Will" he whispered
"Hm?" he asked.
"My name--is Will" A hand snuck back to rub his red backside. Norrington gave his hand a slight slap and said, "No rub."
Will howled and pulled his awa away, hanging his head on the table again "Sorry" he mumbled. Wordlessly he got up and ambled to a cornerttintting his face in his arms again.
Norrington looked around the shop and couldn't believe the mess. He said, "Will Turner, I want you to clean this place up." he said as he started walking to the door almost walking into the sword that was still stuck in the wood. "And, take out this sword."
"Yes sir" Will said, his voice muffled from his covered face. Norrington felt bad for hurting Will...but he shouldn't have made a mess of the shop. Then he walked out to check on Elizabeth.
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Category: Pirates of the Caribbean (movie)
Rating: PG-13
Warning: spanking
Co-written by carelesscat and tiaoconnell
Disclaimner: We don't own it even though we wish we did. We
just play with it
Summary: Scenes of Pirates of the Caribbean re-written to include
spanking!!
------------
Original Scene: The fight in the blacksmith shop between Jack Sparrow and Will Turner
--------------------------
Jack is running around staying out of the way of Norrington and his men. He jumps inside the Blacksmith's shop when he sees some of Norrington's men. He notices the sleepng Mr. Brown and tries to wake him but to no avail. he decides to find something to pry the irons off and uses a metal prod to spur the donkey so that the irons break.
It's then he hears the door start to open after he gets the irons off and heads for cover. Will enters and calms the poor donkey, but notices the hat, ignoring the drunk man on the floor. However, it was the hammer that got his attention. "Not where I left you..." he muttered to hismelf.
Will walks over to the hat and almost touches it, then someone, holding a sword, catches his attention. "You're the one they are hunting," he said slowly. "The pirate"
"You seem somewhat familiar. Have I threatened you before?" Will gave a skeptical look. "I make a point of avoiding familiarity with pirates!" he announced with pride. "Ah well, then it would be a shame to put a black mark on your record. So, if you'll excuse me..." he says turning away and starts to leave.
Will draws a sword and points it at Jack in an expert fashion.
"Do you think this wise, boy - crossing blades with a pirate?" Jack asked drawing his own sword.
"You threatened Miss Swann!" he said darkly, his features filled with anger. Jack smiles and runs his sword up and down Will's sword, "Only a little."
They begin to sword fight among the hanging swords, until Will throws his own sword into the door, barring Jack's exit with a smug look.
Jack tries the door but it is unsuccessful. He starts to walk back, "That...is a wonderful trick...except, once again you are between me and my way out. And now you have no weapon." he says smiling.
"Except one" Will fakes a kick to Jack's groin, making him jump away, dropping his sword in the process. "My strength" Will states as he dives on top of Jack. Jack rolls over on top of Will and says, "But you know nothing about pirates." he says and punches Will in the stomach
Will groans and clutches his stomach, rolling over to the side and smacking a table. Jack starts to move out of the way. Several empty glasses fall onto the floor, amking Jack dance out of the way of the glass and knock over several swords in the process. he grimaces when the banging and clanging of the swords hit the floor. he gets up and looks at Will.
Will staggers to his feet and lunges at Jack The pirate quickly moves out of the way. Will tumbled, grabbing Jack's shirt and ripping it on the process, and broke a table. Jack looked at his shirt and glared at Will, "that was MY best shirt." Will sat up from amid the pile of broken wood. "Oops" he said pishpishly, looking down.
Jack shook his head and dusted himself off. Will got up slowly."Sorry, didn't mean to do that. Was grabbing for your ass actually" he smirked, trying to toy with the pirate. It was his life's goal to make pirates utterly miserable whenever he had the chance.
Jack walked up to Will and backhanded him in the face. Will fell backwards, landing hard on his back with a moan, a little blood trickling from the side of his mouth. He looked at Jack, shocked and horrified "you should show manners towards me." he scolded.
"You---you hit me" he said, sniffling. He had never been hit before in that manner, and it really upset him, or so it seemed.
he looked down at Will and said, "sorry to hit you, but you should show better manners to me, boy." Will rubbed his now swollen lower lip. then Jack turned around to walk toward the door
Will rushed up behind Jack with part of the broken table and smacked him squarely across the backside with it Jack yelped and turned around looking at Will. Will smirked, still holding the piece of wood like one would hold a baseball bat
"you little brat. how dare you hit me like that." he said drawing his sword. "And why the bloody hell shouldn't I?" Will asked. Just then the drunk woke and smacked Jack over the head with his bottle of booze. The pirated fell over face first and Will laughed hysterically as Nogtongton's men entered a moment later.
"excellent work, Mr Brown.You've assisted in the capture of a dangerous fugitive."
"What the fuck? No way, I did that he was skunk drunk!" Will said with a stomp. Norrington looked angrily at Will, "hold your tongue, Mr. Turner." He stuck out his tongue at Norrington.
he looked at his men and said, "take Captain Sparrow to his cell...i have some business to take care of." he said looking back to Will. "Awww, looky my shop, wuhdid doys dys do?" the owner slurred.
Will gulped and took a step back. "Mr Brown...go and have a drink...i want to talk privately with young Mr Turner here." "Oh, drinky sounds Looooooooooovely" the man stumbled and staggered out of the shop
"Um---um---" Will said, his voice rather high-pitched. Norrington glared at Will. Will took several steps backwards. "Aren't you going to escort the pirate to the jail?" he squeaked
"No, Mr Turner...I'm going to deal with your attitude."
"What? Why?" he whined, sounding like a little boy.
"for you sudden outburst...that was very disrespectful." Norrington scolded.
"I didn't mean too" he said. "And that pirate hit me!" "it doesn't matter if HE hit you...i'm talking about that sudden outburst you did when i was TALKING to Mr Brown." he growled at Will.
Will's lower lip trembled and he backed away further, right into the door. There was no escape. "I'm sorry" he whispered, hanging his head. Norrington took off his sword from his hip and walked toward Will Will watched him with wide eyes, then ducked his head again
Norrington looked at him and said, "i'm not going to hurt you, Mr Turner." "Then what are you gonna do?" he asknot not looking up, swiping the blood from his mouth again. Norrington walked up and grabbed Will's arms, "i'm going to discipline you."
"No, I don't want a spanking!" Will shouted
he didn't say anything as he led Will to Mr Brown's tool table. "I'll be good, I promise, I'm really sorry"
Norrington brushed some of the tools off tab table and bent Will over it. Will squirmed to get away, but Norrington was a lot stronger then he looked. "I'll be good I swear!! Don't spank me please! I'm not a little kid!"
"Mr Turner...you ACTED like a little child...so you will be punished like one." he said as he started to take Will's pants down
"Hey, you can't do that! Stop that, right now!! noooooooooooo!" he howled as his backside was exposed to the cool
"i AM a lot older than you, Mr Turner." he said as he put his hand on Will's back
"But I don't want you too, I'm sorry, I am, I won't do it again!" "It's too late for that." Norrington said as he raised his other hand and brought it down hard on Will's backside SMACK "OWWW!"
SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK Will squirmed and tried to get away as large pink handprints appeared on his cheeks. "I'm sorry, I really am!!" he howled.
Norrington kept him still and said, "Why are you being punished?" he asked as he gave Will another spank SMACK
"for being rude!! OWW" WIll sniffled and put his face on the table under his arms. Norrington nodded and said, "Are you going to act like this again?" he asked as he gave him another hard spank on his sit spot SMACK
"No Sir! Oww, please stop, I'll be very good, I promise sir!"
"I hope you will be good...and to make sure..." as he said that he gave Will 2 extra hard spanks on his backside and sit spot SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK Will started to cry loudly
then he started to gently rub Will's back and said, "Mr Turner...didn't you ever get punished when you were living with your parents?"
"My father was gone so much" Will said softly through his tears. "And my mother only spanked me once, with my pants on,a nd then she cried and said she'd never do it again."
he sighed and said, "If you EVER do anything like this again...I'll be using my belt on your backside." Will broke into sobs "I didn't mean to be a bad boy" he sounded scared.
"It's alright, Mr. Turner...it's all over.
"
"Will" he whispered
"Hm?" he asked.
"My name--is Will" A hand snuck back to rub his red backside. Norrington gave his hand a slight slap and said, "No rub."
Will howled and pulled his awa away, hanging his head on the table again "Sorry" he mumbled. Wordlessly he got up and ambled to a cornerttintting his face in his arms again.
Norrington looked around the shop and couldn't believe the mess. He said, "Will Turner, I want you to clean this place up." he said as he started walking to the door almost walking into the sword that was still stuck in the wood. "And, take out this sword."
"Yes sir" Will said, his voice muffled from his covered face. Norrington felt bad for hurting Will...but he shouldn't have made a mess of the shop. Then he walked out to check on Elizabeth.
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