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Bringing it down

By: NicolinaN
folder M through R › Pitch Black
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 20
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Disclaimer: I do not own Pitch Black, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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First encounter

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She stumbled a little while advancing towards the living quarters. She turned a corner, froze and couldn’t at first take in the scene in front of her: one cryochamber was empty. And it wasn’t just anybody’s, it was the prisoners, the deadliest man in the galaxy, Riddick, the one man you wouldn’t want to be on the same planet with if he was free, let alone in a ship out in deep space! She turned around to get the hell out of there and could just barely hide a scream when she saw what he had done to the two police officers.

Running through the cryosection, with her heart pounding and terror screaming in her mind, she had just one thought in mind; to put as much distance as possible between her and the cockpit where she assumed he’d be.

Suddenly the lights went out and the ship went pitch black!

She gasped and stopped. I'm dead, she thought. I'm dead, oh God, I didn't want it to end like this! Stretching her hands in front of her she tried to recall her surroundings and then slowly continued in the direction she thought was towards the cargo section in the rear. The only place she could think of that would offer some hiding places.

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Riddick silently entered the mid part of the ship, a focused and grim expression on his face, shiv in hand. He was ready to kill. Turning out the lights gave him an advantage over whoever he’d face. Not that he normally needed it, superior in strength and speed over most humans as he was. However he’d recently got out of his semi-hibernating existence and hadn’t yet fully recovered his strength.

What he saw in the back of the big chamber startled him just a little and then a cruel smirk spread across his face. He could have some fun with this one first, before... Suddenly she disappeared. “What the fuck?” he muttered.

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When she fell it came as a complete surprise to her. And she fell hard! A sharp pain shot through her right shoulder and she screamed right out. Unable to use her arm she realized she’d broken it. Tears welled up in her eyes, it was so unfair!

There was a weak light down here, she had fallen a floor and was now below the cryos. Maybe she could hide somewhere here and then figure out what to do. Holding her breath to fight the pain she stood up and turned to move when she walked right into a rock hard body.

“No” she gasped and threw herself backwards, landing on her hurting arm. She screamed right out in pain. Squirming on the floor she tried to get up again, but it was too late, he jumped at her and pinned her down to the floor with the weight of his body. She panicked when she saw him for the first time, a huge muscular body, shaved head, goggles on that made him look merciless and an expression on his face that erased all hope for prayers to be heard. Tossing her head from side to side and kicking her legs she fought to get away. When she felt a cold, sharp metal blade at her throat she went completely still. Oh, God, this is it, she thought.

“Please” she tried to say, but her lips just moved a little, she couldn't produce a sound, she was too horrified. She stiffened when she felt a hand on her breast, moving down along her side and over her stomach. Suddenly the hand retracted and a hint of surprise flew across the face of her attacker and for a brief moment the pressure of the shiv lightened. Instinctively she took the chance and arched to bring him out of balance and was able to burst up with a knee to connect it with his crotch. Maybe the self-protection classes she'd taken more than a year ago would pay off….

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“Motherfuck” he moaned between his teeth and bent forward in pain. He involuntarily eased the pressure of the shiv and the woman quickly crawled out of his grip, got up and ran towards the cargo section in the rear part of the ship. Riddick didn’t follow her. Let her huddle away, he would deal with her later. He swore and got to his feet, this was an unexpected turn of events. He still had some check-ups to run on the main computer before setting his new course and this shit would take too much time for now. He left and headed for the cockpit.



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