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A Jedi's heart

By: Bengal1988
folder Star Wars (All) › General
Rating: Adult +
Chapters: 2
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Disclaimer: don't own star wars and I will not be profitting from writing this story
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Chapter 1


Chapter 1
POV: Talia

Obi- wan and I are the only one on the space ship. The first two hour on the ship was quite because I was to nervous to talk to him. Obi- wan is really handsome. He made me hot and bother. I couldn’t focus on a intelligence conversion. I decide to read a book. After like two hour pass Obi- wan asked me a question.
“ Talia I’m making some Tea would you like some tea?” he asked.
“ Yes please” I said. Obi- Wan came back with two mugs in his hands.
“ Are you always this quieted?” he asked.
“ It depends on my mood, I’m worried about my father” I said.
“ He also worried about you” said Obi- Wan
“ It funny my father had me learn hand to hand combat so I could defense myself” I said.
“Well he still worried about you” he said. I sipped on Tea.
“ He been more worried for me scenes my mother died” I said.
“ I’m sorry about your mother” He said.
“ Thanks” I said.
“ What are you reading?” I asked.
“ It legends and fairy tales, my grandmother give to me before I left” I said.
A droid come up to Obi-Wan and talk to him.
“ There a ship coming toward, I need you to come up front to buckle yourself in” he said. I follow Obi-wan up to the front of the ship. I buckle myself into the seat. Obi- wan take a hold of the control. A hail come over the intercom.
“ This is Commander Cale you will stop and let us board you or you will be shoot down” said Commander Cale.
“ I rather be shoot down then be bait” I said on the intercom before Obi-Wan could stop me. I felt the whole ship shake and the light on control board went off. The ship shake again.
“ We are losing power to control the ship” Obi-Wan said.
“Sorry but if we are capture I had be used as bait” I said. Obi- Wan nodded.
“We had enough power to make to that planet” Said Obi-Wan. Obi- Wan flew to the close planet. The enemy ship was still firing on us. I could feel the gravity of the planet took a hold the ship. The enemy ship back off and went into hyper spaces.
“ The ship doesn’t have any power we are going to crash” Said Obi-Wan in a calm voice.
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POV: Obi- Wan

The gravity took a hold of the ship and it was pulling us down. The ship lost all power and I was going have to crash land. The ship enter the atmosphere I could see there were low hanging clouds. I couldn’t recognized what was ground and sky.
“Brace for Impact” I said to Talia. I felt the space ship hit the ground. The ship started to roll over and over. Glass and metal was flying every where. I heard Talia screaming. I didn’t know if it was out of fear or pain. Anything went black.
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The Space ship stopped rolling over. The space ship was up right. There was no way the ship would be able to fly again. The ship back end was crash. Bags and other thing were scattered over the landscape. The planet was hostile and cold. There were not many living thing on this planet.
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POV: Talia

I wake up with a gasp. My whole body was in pain and I was having some problems breathing. I could feel I had two or more broken rids. I had a hug pieces of metal that went though in my right shoulder. I could see the bone and ligament of my shoulder. I also had some minor scraps and cuts. I unbuckle myself and check on Obi-Wan. I shake him to wake him. It was hard because I was losing a lot blood. My breathing was getting hard to control with out being in a lot of pain.
“Obi-Wan” I gasp out. I shake him again. He finally wake up. He didn’t seem to injure.
“ Talia how bad are you hurt?” he asked.
“Bad ha ha enough” I said.
“Let me check” He said. He unbuckle his self and started to check my shoulder.
“ I know ha ha that ha ha I broke ha ha two or more ha ha rids” I said.
“ Alright free we had to pull that metal piece out of our shoulder” He said.
When he started to touch the metal pieces my shoulder hurts.
“ I’m going to get something to knock you out and some pain killers so I can work on your arms” said Obi- Wan.
Obi-Wan went into the back of the ship and come back to with a big whit boxes.
He took out One needle and a can of sedation spray. I sat down on the seat.
“ Take a deep breath of the spray” said Obi-Wan. I took a deep breath and I felt like on was on cloud nine before I pass out.
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POV: Obi-Wan

I remove the piece of metal from Talia shoulder. There was a lot of blood. The muscle was damage but I repaired it enough to move the arm. There was also a slow chip of the shoulder bone. Nothing seem to be damage in her shoulder wound. I clean the wound out and stitch the wound. I wrap the wound and put her arm in a sling. I check her rids. I could feel two rids broken. I had to remove her black dress to warp her rids. I couldn’t help staring at her perfect body. I put her dress back on. I have to focus on the task. I give her a shot of a pain killers. I looked out the creaked window to see ice and snow. I know that I didn’t get a warm cloaks for Talia and me we sure freeze to death. When I went to the back of the ship I saw that it was crashed and a wide hole and most of the bags were outside.

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