Bringing it down

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All good things has an end... But by the time you´ll be finished reding this chapter I hope you´ll all be in to much hurry for the shower or any boyfriends/husbands available than to flame me for ending it! Love you all, your reviews has been so funny and encouraging. Thankyou for the ride! / Nicolina

Chapter 20 Bringing It Home


As the rain got even worse, and with a deafening roar poured down on them, beating at their unshielded bodies, they ran the last kilometer. Finally back at Karyn´s house her hands trembled too much when she tried to unlock the door and Riddick had to take her hand to steady it. Once inside, she realized he hadn't let go of her hand yet. She turned to face him to make some funny comment about him holding her hand, but her breath caught in her throat when she saw him.

They were breathing heavily, soaking wet from head to toe, and in the warmth of her house, steam had started to rise from their bodies.

Riddick looked at her and had a dead serious expression on his face. His eyes hidden as so often, by his goggles, making his intentions unreadable.

A feeling of not being perfectly safe crept up on Karyn and she tried to take a step back. Memories from all the violence she had seen flashed before her eyes.

Riddick didn't let her back away one inch. Instead he moved closer, towering over her with his huge frame, forcing Karyn to bend her head back to look up at him.

“Rid…” she started to say with a small voice. She was unable to continue though when he, with the knuckles of his free hand, caressed her wet cold skin from her chin, down along her throat, following the curve of her breast, partly exposed under the coat, and just barely brushing over her nipple under the fabric. Then he let his hand drop to his side.

Karyn´s nipples hardened instantly and she was already breathing heavier. She looked questioningly at Riddick, who sensed her response and caught her in his arms. He bent his head and softly, but determinedly, caught her lips with his, letting his tongue probe her yet closed lips until she, almost unknowingly, parted them slightly. With a triumphant growl he pushed his tongue further inside until he met hers. Letting their tips dance, he tasted her for the first time in a very, very long year.

They stood there kissing, unaware of their surroundings like a young teenage couple, water gathering in an ever widening pool on the floor at their feet.

In spite of the heat Karyn felt on the inside, she shuddered. Her whole body was ice cold, the remains of her clothes were soaking and, probably most of all, she was nervous. As the tension in her body rose, her teeth started to chatter and Riddick interrupted their kiss. He looked down at her, pulled off his goggles, and with a hint of humor in his eyes he said with his gravel voice:

“I believe we need to get you warm.”

Karyn, with skin now whiter than normal, almost turning a shade of blue, could only nod stiffly.

Deliberately slow, Riddick peeled away the coat, letting it fall to the floor. He then, inch by inch, pulled down the wet skirt, that clung like it was glued to her body, and let it go the same way as the coat, as did the torn blouse and bra. Finally she stood in front of him, naked and with a heart gone wild in her chest. Not really afraid, but nervous.

Shivering she looked up and met his mesmerizing gaze, saw the light play in his enhanced irises, saw the desire, and the need. She recognized it.

It matched her own.

Riddick kicked away his boots and lifted her out of her own soaking shoes. He then maneuvered her backward, towards the bathroom. Karyn tried to capture his eyes as he turned on the water in the shower, adjusting it to a comfortable temperature, but he avoided her gaze. She tried to determine his intentions, tried to foresee his next move, but he was the master of that game.

When he directed the water at her she gasped and squirmed, trying to get away. Once she had caught her breath, she screamed.

“It's too hot, Riddick!” She tried to evade the burning water and cursed. “Damn you! I can never trust you, can I?”

Riddick laughed and squirted some water in her face.

“It's not too hot, sweetheart. It's you who are too cold. Relax.” He placed a kiss on her wet lips.

“Have some faith, will ya!”

Karyn groaned and took a firm hold of Riddick´s shirt, surprising him by pulling him into the streaming water as well, instead of pushing him away as he had expected. He roared and gasped.

“Hell, it is hot!” He leaned in and pressed against her, forcing her up against the tiled wall.
“But it's not the water…” He caught her lower lip between his, letting his tongue play until Karyn took his head in her hands and pressed her lips tighter against his, opening her mouth to his in a hungry kiss.

“You're driving me crazy” she mumbled into his mouth. She was once more lost in the feeling of his body pressed against hers. Caressing the back of his neck, she felt the stubble on his head, followed the contour of one ear with the tip of her finger and continued her exploration down along the side of his neck, enjoying the sensation of his muscular shoulder and arm under her palm.

It hit her like a shock wave when he laid a hand on her hip and let it follow the smooth contours of her lower belly, caressing the sensitive skin on the inside of her thigh, before he let one finger slide between her soft, slick folds.

“Mmmmm Karyn!” he growled when he felt how wet she was.

“Oh Riddick” she whispered in a hoarse voice. She was happy he had her back tightly pressed into the wall, otherwise she would have fallen, her knees unable to hold her weight any longer. She didn't feel the hot water from the shower anymore, nor did she shiver from cold. All she could think of was his smell, his taste, the stubble on his chin scratching in a delightfully painful way at hers, his hands holding her in a firm grip and his full lips, tasting her like there were no tomorrow.

Riddick groaned with displeasure when she placed her palms at his chest and slowly but determinedly pushed him away.

He looked questioningly at her. Karyn smiled mischievously back and started to tug at the wet shirt that clung at his torso. Riddick raised his arms and let her pull it off. Karyn threw it in a corner, then she looked at Riddick and shook her head in an attempt to free her eyes from the pouring water. Slowly she let her hands follow the firm contour of his naked chest. The sensation from his body against her palms sending bolts of electricity to her nipples and the apex of her thighs.

She continued down to the waist of his pants and unbuttoned the first button.

“I believe there is someone else who also needs a little warming up…” she said in a husky voice and ripped the remaining buttons open, sending a couple flying through the bathroom.

“Damn woman!” Riddick burst out. “If I didn't know you, you'd scare me!” The look on his face didn't look scared at all though; on the contrary there was a sensual grin all over his beautiful features. He leaned his head back and let the water flow over him. He sure could use some heating up…

Karyn had some trouble yanking down Riddick´s wet pants, but managed to get them past his hips. He wasn't wearing any underwear and as soon as she had ripped the pants open, his erect member had sprung free. Karyn crouched, taking a moment to admire it's powerful beauty, when Riddick made it jump a little, surprising Karyn completely. She slipped and fell on her back with a relieved giggle.

Riddick smiled and helped her up. He stepped out of his pants and kicked them into the same corner.

They now stood there naked in front of each other, and Karyn suddenly felt very vulnerable. She had never been in this situation with Riddick before. They had fucked, sure. Made love… maybe. But now they had both been so carefree, like a couple in love…

The smiles on their faces faded as Riddick moved in on her once more. He cupped one hand around the back of her neck, pulling her towards him for a kiss. With his other hand he gripped one of her breasts firmly and kneaded it, rolling the nipple between his thumb and his index finger until it was painfully erect.

Karyn responded with raw instinct and answered his kiss, sucking his tongue into her mouth, playing with it and biting his lip just a little. She cupped her hands around his buttocks, pressing him hard against her. The sensation of his hot erection on the lower part of her belly turned her aching wetness into a heavy feeling deep down in her core.

Riddick continued with his hand, down along her belly, following her rounded feminine curves, curling his fingers in the wet hair covering her mound and drawing circles in it, widening them more and more until he touched her swollen folds. His circling movements concentrated on her engorged clitoris, and the aching sensation spreading along the inside of her thighs and up along her belly to her erect nipples, was almost enough in itself to set her off.

Karyn moaned and arched into his hand, her erratic breathing getting shallower by the second. She kneaded his buttocks in response, but was too lost in her own pleasure to be able to give more.

When Riddick slowly withdrew his hand, Karyn groaned with disappointment. He pressed even harder against her and said in a low, gravelly voice:

“Are you ready for this?”

Karyn´s shift of her hands to clasp at his shoulders was answer enough. Riddick lifted her, as if she weighed nothing, up against the wall and slowly, slowly lowered her until the head of his cock rested at her slick entrance. Then he waited.

“Riddick” Karyn panted. “I want you to!”

In one move he slammed the full length of his manhood into her aching tunnel.

“GOD!” she screamed, and the knuckles of her hands which were gripping at his broad shoulders, turned white as she held on.

Riddick waited a few moments to let her adjust to his size, then he withdrew partially only to once more slam into her. And again, and again.

“Don't pull out Riddick” she moaned between her teeth. “Just keep coming innnnnnnggggghhhh….. aaaahhhhhh. It feeeeeeeels so goooooood!”


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Riddick silenced her by kissing her feverishly. Fucking her intensely, he was getting closer and closer to his release, and by the sounds of it Karyn was too. He held her up with his hands under her buttocks and kept thrusting harder and harder into her smooth flesh.

He let her mouth go and bent his head down to let his tongue play with one of her hardened nipples. That finally sent Karyn over the edge and with loud repeated moans she began to tremble in his arms as he could feel her inner walls contract over and over again.

Riddick had wanted to enjoy her orgasm, but the feeling of her spasms was too pleasurable, and he joined her. Slamming her harder against the wall with his final heavy thrusts, he could feel his own orgasm building, like liquid fire rapidly spreading through the lower part of his belly until it ruptured. He crushed his mouth against hers, tasting every crevice, every ridge, and finally moaned loudly into her mouth as the waves of his release took hold of him.

“Karyn” he panted. “Karyn, OH FUCK!” he groaned as his hot semen repeatedly shot into her.


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When the last shudder left their bodies, they were still holding each other in a firm embrace and the water was still flowing down on them as Riddick slowly set her back down on the floor. Riddick was going to have ten fingertip-shaped bruises on his shoulders for days to come, and Karyn scratches all over her back. None of that mattered for the moment though. Their eyes locked in affection, and before Karyn could stop herself, she mouthed:

“I love you.…”

She thought she felt him flinch. Riddick took one long look at her and she swallowed audibly, feeling her cheeks turn hot. Her heart rate picked up a little. What was he going to do? Had he heard her at all?

Riddick´s eyes were glittering as he stretched out his hand past her and turned off the shower.

“Does this mean you're gonna stop giving me a hard time?” he said slowly, with a hint of mock in his voice, looking at her partly from the side.

“Ah, get off me, you piece of shit!” Karyn burst out and tried to push him away.

Riddick just laughed, a hearty booming sound she had never heard before, scooped her up in his arms and went out of the bathroom, grabbing a couple of towels on the way. When they passed through the kitchen Karyn could hear the dramatic, thundering roar from the rain, pouring down relentlessly on the roof. A sound she couldn't recall hearing since they'd entered the house…

Gently laying her down on the bed, he swept a big towel around her wet, still slightly trembling body and the other around his own waist.

“Are you still cold?” he asked, frowning.

“You gotta be kidding me?!” she replied, nearly laughing.

Riddick caught her eyes, hypnotizing her with his mercury gaze, looking dead serious. Then he jumped on her, easily wrestling her down and pinning her to the mattress. Karyn gasped and fought to get free, while Riddick just snickered.

“Ahhh” she panted. “Come on, big guy! It's punishable by law for big men to jump on smaller women like that!”

Riddick grinned and sent her a very meaningful look.

“Punishable! How?” he growled lazily in a tone even deeper than normal.

Karyn´s face cracked into a mischievous grin. “Death by orgasm…” She was already aroused again, or perhaps she'd never stopped.

Riddick looked stunned for a moment, then he let her go and threw himself on his back next to her on the bed. His body language more than well showing ´come and get me´.

Attempting to look serious, she crawled up and positioned herself on top of Riddick, palms on each side of his face and let her long hair fall down to tickle him on the chest. She teasingly ground her mound against his crotch and could feel the bulge from his growing erection through the towels.

A shiver went through her and she sat back up, amazed by what was happening. In her arms lay one of the most dangerous and feared men in the known world, but here he was, sweeter than any man she'd ever been with and getting cozy on her bed.

Riddick licked his lips and pulled her back down, but she placed a hand on his chest and pushed herself back up.

“No, hon” she whispered in a husky voice. “It's my turn.” She opened the towel wrapped around her and let it drop, exposing her naked, still slightly damp breasts and belly. Karyn tied her hair back in a knot around itself, a gesture she did quite often without thinking about it. Now seeing her stretching like that, Riddick found it to be an extremely erotic vision.

Karyn let her fingertips touch the skin on Riddick´s chest with featherlike strokes, circling around his nipples and finally pinching them slightly. Enjoying the feeling how they grew harder, she massaged the beautiful strong muscles on his chest before she carefully scratched her nails down along his belly, making Riddick arch into her with pleasure. She could also feel something else that arched into her…

She cocked her head and smiled at him, bent forward and whispered: “Beautiful.” Karyn was rewarded with a broad smile and she could feel his hands on her hips, pressing her harder against his throbbing erection.

“You wanna play games, Karyn?” he said in his gravelly voice, giving her goosebumps with anticipation. “You know who you're playing, don´t you?” he said mockingly.

“Riddick” she said, “If you are the master of games, then I am the top student!” She shifted position slightly and slowly opened up the towel wrapped around his waist, revealing his fully erect member. Karyn gave Riddick a short gaze before she turned her attention to his cock. Caressing his belly and his thighs, she let her hands carefully grip the base of his manhood and lowered her head until her lips touched the tip.

Karyn licked the smooth head of his cock and could feel the salty taste of their juices mixed from their previous encounter. She inhaled the musky scent from his sex, and could feel her nipples harden in anticipation as she let her lips enclose his rock hard cock, beginning a slow, rhythmic motion up and down his shaft. Riddick arched into her and growled, his arousal increasing by each stroke. He had fucked many women in his life, but he had never wanted a woman like he wanted Karyn.

Riddick laid his palm against Karyn´s cheek, making her interrupt what she was doing. She looked questioningly up at him as he brushed a calloused thumb over her chin.

In one single move, Riddick rose and lifted Karyn with him, reversing their positions.
Karyn frowned slightly.

“Wasn't it good? I'm not that exp….” Riddick hushed her with a kiss on her parted lips.

“Woman! You make me feel like a teenager! If I cum now I´m gonna be spent for at least… an hour…”

Karyn smiled relieved. “Shit! That long! We can't have that, can we?”

Riddick shook his head and took a moment to admire the sight beneath him.

Suddenly Karyn gripped at his shoulders, pushing him away a little.

“You're not gonna bite me again, are you?” she asked with a worried look, forcing Riddick to burst out in a rumbling laughter, then he got serious again.

“I might… But if I do, you’ll love every bit of it!” He looked at her with an unreadable face and she was once more lost in his eyes mesmerizing flicker of silver.

“You're fucking with me. I know you are!” she said, but her voice didn't sound that confident.

“You know I am, huh? Karyn, you don't know anything about me…” Riddick growled in a low mocking tone with just a hint of threat in it.

Karyn´s heart rate picked up as she felt him press against her, his hot, hard member pushing at her entrance, just enough to tease her into an aching need. She realized that he could do whatever the fuck he wanted with her, just as long as he did it long and hard!

Karyn placed her hands at Riddick´s cheeks and pulled him towards her, letting their lips meet in a deep kiss. Their tongues swirled round each other and then she bit him, teasingly, in his lower lip, smiling as she did. Riddick answered with thrusting into her full force without any warning, making her gasp with the initial shock and then let out a moan.

“GOD YES!” she yelled. And as he thrust harder and harder into her, holding her shoulders down to prevent her head from repeatedly smash into the headboard, she moaned with each thrust.

“You're… wrong… I… DO… know… who …I'm… fucking… with…”

“You do, do you!?” Riddick growled and let their lips meet in another crushing kiss as the intensity of their arousal increased. He pounded into her harder and harder, Karyn met each thrust with a counter thrust, holding on to his back, digging her nails deep into his flesh.

“I'm cuming” Karyn cried into his mouth. “OH GOD! You feel so GOOOOOOD!”

“RIDDIIIIICK!” she cried as the waves of her orgasm came rolling over her. Riddick never broke the kiss as the intense contractions of her orgasm set off his own. Tickling heat rushed from his limbs toward the head of his cock and ruptured into a cascade, making his member twitch repeatedly as he emptied his load deep inside her mound.

“Karyn” he mumbled as the tensions slowly left his body. “Oh, Karyn…” He kissed her on her nose, and on her forehead, on one cheek and then the other. He placed a final kiss on her chin before he returned to kiss her swollen lips again.

Karyn could feel each of his kisses leave hot, burning traces on her face. She had never felt as cared for, as taken care of, in her whole life before this.

“I ain´t lettin´ you go now, Karyn” he whispered in her ear, when they lay naked side by side in each others arms afterwards, panting, their bodies slick with sweat.

She frowned and withdrew slightly, lifting her head to look at him.

“What are you talking about?”

He felt her tense and pulled her closer, burying his face in the angle between her neck and shoulder. He smiled as he spoke, he knew her by now. Knew how proud she was, how important it was for her to remain independent.

“I can't leave… I tried that. I've tried to stay away, knowing it wouldn't work out. But I can't seem to keep the fuck away!”

Karyn was speechless. That didn't happen too often. It probably didn't happen often that Riddick declared something like this either, so maybe it was a match!

“You succeeded damn well in staying out of my life this last year!” she was finally able to croak.

“Karyn!” he interrupted. “You know what the fuck I am!”

She could only nod. Oh, yes, did she know!

“I don't know if I can offer you anything you need…” he hesitated, and Karyn suddenly burst out in tears.

“Riddick! I'm doing so FUCKING well on my own! I have Jarid, and my work, and some friends. But something is missing… YOU are missing, Riddick!”

“You want me to stay?” Riddick looked stunned.

“I thought you didn't leave me any choice!” she mocked.

“Ahh, fuck, that´s not how it works…” he stopped when he saw the teasing smile on her face.

“WOMAN!” he burst out. “You're the only fucking human being in the universe who gets away with that!”

Karyn´s smile faded. “Yeah… there is one thing though…” She swallowed tightly. This suddenly felt very uncomfortable. “If you DO want to take part of our lives… You know, I can't ask you to change the way you live. But if you want to stick around… You can't keep killing people, Riddick! It wouldn't work. Not in a lifetime…” While she spoke she had grabbed hold of the sheet next to her and pulled it up to her chin, trying to hide a little. She felt extremely vulnerable, afraid that she had pushed him a little too far.


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Riddick followed the curve of her forehead with the tip of his index finger, traced the line of her delicate nose and down over her lips, stopping where the sheet hid the rest.

“I know that.” He smiled and kissed her tenderly, looking admiringly at the beautiful face of this strong woman. HIS strong woman.

“I know that!”


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THE END