Will love be the saviour?
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Category:
Pirates of the Caribbean (All) › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
21
Views:
13,496
Reviews:
65
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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I do not own the Pirates of the Caribbean movie series, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
inescapably
Jack was left there all by himself, he could hear himself begging for the release he needed badly, but couldn’t have, blood and cum dripping down from his ass; James had left to Will’s cabin. He just hoped James wouldn’t harm the boy; he had already been through enough.
Will was peacefully asleep but he was soon awake when the door slammed open and James stepped inside.
James looked at the blacksmith and licked his lips. The boy looked like he had skin softer than a woman’s, he had the innocence of an angel.
James was convinced he could; all it needed was a bit of torture and the experience of being in the leading position and then…then the beautiful blacksmith would be a true devil, only thinking about how to cause others pain and to get his own pleasure out of that pain.
Will was scared of what was going to happen, suddenly not so sure this was what he wanted.
Jack had lost his voice by all the begging he had done and sighed.
James walked to Will and said, “Are you sure this is what you want mister Turner?”
Will wasn’t sure if that was what he wanted and it took all his willpower for him not to refuse after all. He would do it for Jack. He wouldn’t let him down, not this time. He already did that twice, when Jack had the chance to get his Pearl back and when Jack was caught as well, he should have stuck up for him, like he did for him as well. He would do it good this time, so he gave a nod and said, “As long as you do not hurt Jack, please”
James smiled amused and said, “It seems you care for each other very much, Jack requested the same thing for you”
Will’s eyes widened. Was he too late? Would Jack already be hurt so much that he had changed?
James chuckled and said, “Don’t worry, I haven’t hurt him yet. I tell you what, if you are gonna be very nice to me now, I will leave him unharmed.”
Will slicked, he had never pleased anyone before, not out of his own, only Jack, he wasn’t sure if he would do it right, but he had to try. He looked at James and crawled to him on all fours and fingered the belt, trying to get it out of the pants.
James watched Will’s every movement.
Will pulled the belt out and unzipped the pants, he was surprised to see that the commodore didn’t wear any underwear, while with his status it is highly obliged. He looked at James and began stroking him with trembling hands.
James moaned softly, he had expected Will’s hands to be rough, like a blacksmith’s should be, but his were surprisingly soft and smooth.
Will moved faster on him, he knew James expected him to take his erection into his mouth, but he didn’t have many experiences with it and Jack always helped him, so he was scared he would choke or do something wrong.
James moaned more but really wanted to feel that warm hot mouth on his cock and looked at the boy and said, “Be very nice Will”
Will knew what he meant and leaned forward, first licking the head of James’ erection, before circling it with his tongue, trying to remember everything Jack learned abouabout given blowjobs.
James had to brace himself, he had never thought Will would be that good.
Will was glad he did it right and took the entire length of James into houthouth, bobbling back and forth. He continued this till James came and forced him to swallow. Will hated that, although it wasn’t really true, he thought Jack tasted ten times better than anyone.
James was fully satisfied and pulled his pants back up & zipped it, putting the belt on again he said, “You have been nice mister Turner, very nice. I will keep my word, Jack will not be harmed…for now…if you stay nice he will stay unharmed, you understand?”
Will looked at hnd gnd gave a nod and said, “Yes commodore”
James smiled and said, “Good, now, you go by my rules, you will not see Jack till we leave the ship without my permission, if you do see him without him, he will be in very big trouble, do I make myself cl”
”
Will looked at him, disgusted by him, but it did not show in his eyes, and said, “Inescapably…clear”
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Alright...why do people dislike this chapter. Please fill me in! I know it mibe cbe confusing so a small explanation: James makes Will believe that if he does what James tells him to, Jack will be okay, which obviously he won't that's why he made sure they wouldn't see each other.
Now, please tell me why you think this is a bad chapter, if you're still with me on this and what it is that i should change (and then i mean storywise)
I had an idea that may be okay...i can delete the last two chapters & make it the end, that they go with Norrington & live happily ever after. (Untill i do a sequel :p ) or just delete them and don't let Norrington get there. What do you guys think.
Please help me out here
Will was peacefully asleep but he was soon awake when the door slammed open and James stepped inside.
James looked at the blacksmith and licked his lips. The boy looked like he had skin softer than a woman’s, he had the innocence of an angel.
James was convinced he could; all it needed was a bit of torture and the experience of being in the leading position and then…then the beautiful blacksmith would be a true devil, only thinking about how to cause others pain and to get his own pleasure out of that pain.
Will was scared of what was going to happen, suddenly not so sure this was what he wanted.
Jack had lost his voice by all the begging he had done and sighed.
James walked to Will and said, “Are you sure this is what you want mister Turner?”
Will wasn’t sure if that was what he wanted and it took all his willpower for him not to refuse after all. He would do it for Jack. He wouldn’t let him down, not this time. He already did that twice, when Jack had the chance to get his Pearl back and when Jack was caught as well, he should have stuck up for him, like he did for him as well. He would do it good this time, so he gave a nod and said, “As long as you do not hurt Jack, please”
James smiled amused and said, “It seems you care for each other very much, Jack requested the same thing for you”
Will’s eyes widened. Was he too late? Would Jack already be hurt so much that he had changed?
James chuckled and said, “Don’t worry, I haven’t hurt him yet. I tell you what, if you are gonna be very nice to me now, I will leave him unharmed.”
Will slicked, he had never pleased anyone before, not out of his own, only Jack, he wasn’t sure if he would do it right, but he had to try. He looked at James and crawled to him on all fours and fingered the belt, trying to get it out of the pants.
James watched Will’s every movement.
Will pulled the belt out and unzipped the pants, he was surprised to see that the commodore didn’t wear any underwear, while with his status it is highly obliged. He looked at James and began stroking him with trembling hands.
James moaned softly, he had expected Will’s hands to be rough, like a blacksmith’s should be, but his were surprisingly soft and smooth.
Will moved faster on him, he knew James expected him to take his erection into his mouth, but he didn’t have many experiences with it and Jack always helped him, so he was scared he would choke or do something wrong.
James moaned more but really wanted to feel that warm hot mouth on his cock and looked at the boy and said, “Be very nice Will”
Will knew what he meant and leaned forward, first licking the head of James’ erection, before circling it with his tongue, trying to remember everything Jack learned abouabout given blowjobs.
James had to brace himself, he had never thought Will would be that good.
Will was glad he did it right and took the entire length of James into houthouth, bobbling back and forth. He continued this till James came and forced him to swallow. Will hated that, although it wasn’t really true, he thought Jack tasted ten times better than anyone.
James was fully satisfied and pulled his pants back up & zipped it, putting the belt on again he said, “You have been nice mister Turner, very nice. I will keep my word, Jack will not be harmed…for now…if you stay nice he will stay unharmed, you understand?”
Will looked at hnd gnd gave a nod and said, “Yes commodore”
James smiled and said, “Good, now, you go by my rules, you will not see Jack till we leave the ship without my permission, if you do see him without him, he will be in very big trouble, do I make myself cl”
”
Will looked at him, disgusted by him, but it did not show in his eyes, and said, “Inescapably…clear”
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Alright...why do people dislike this chapter. Please fill me in! I know it mibe cbe confusing so a small explanation: James makes Will believe that if he does what James tells him to, Jack will be okay, which obviously he won't that's why he made sure they wouldn't see each other.
Now, please tell me why you think this is a bad chapter, if you're still with me on this and what it is that i should change (and then i mean storywise)
I had an idea that may be okay...i can delete the last two chapters & make it the end, that they go with Norrington & live happily ever after. (Untill i do a sequel :p ) or just delete them and don't let Norrington get there. What do you guys think.
Please help me out here