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By: Maribel
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Top Floor

CHAPTER 28: TOP FLOOR
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**************************11:25PM AT THE EDGE **************************

Eva decides they better leave. She wants to be home in case Dom shows up. She walks out of the bathroom and starts looking for Erica, she sees one of her friends. 'Damn what's her name again?' Eva tries to recall.

"Hey!" she yells out not bothering with the name. "Where's Erica?" she asks Lisandra.

"She must be on the dance floor with Justin" Lisandra yells back over the music. Eva makes her way to the dance floor and looks around, the lights are flashing and makes everyones face look distorded. She squints her eyes trying to make her vision work for her. As soon as she sees someone resembling Erica, she makes her way to them. Now the dance floor is being consumed, with smoke effects. ' Great ' Eva thinks. The palce is too crowded, she goes back to where Erica's friends are.

"I can't find her"

"What?" Rachel puts her hand by her ear.

"Erica, I can't find Erica, help me find her" they all nod and split up. Eva bumps into Justin and asks him if he's seen Erica.

"Nah, were dancing together but she told me she was getting something to drink and never came back" now Eva's ne wer were on edge. Her intuition kicks in, she jumps on the stage and begins scoping the entire palce out...nothing. Lisandra taps Eva on the shoulder and Eva turns around surprised.

"Sorry if I scared you, but Geeny said the last time she saw Erica, she was walking out with Jay" Eva hardly waits for her to finish talking, she makes her way outside pushing people to the side. She stands out there looking up and down the streets. Eva flips open her phone and dials Milton, she tells him to meet her in front of the club. It seems like only minutes have pased by when Milton rolls up in a Navigator followed by a Range Rover, there are about 4 guys in each car and they're all strapped.
Turning the corner Dom sees the club and tells Vince to pull up.

''There it is V, I think that's her outside" Dom sees Eva standing in front of the club, his eyes go across the street and sees some guys approaching with guns, Vince notices as well, he screeches in front of the guys and Dom jumps out with gun in hand. Both Vince and Dom are standing in the middle of the street, guns drawn and so is Milton and his guys. Eva runs in between both of them with her hands in front of her telling them to stop.

''WAIT!, NO, Milton he's cool, put your guns down..............Dom he's my cousin..........what the hell are you doing here?'' Eva places her hand on his chest and pushes him away from Milton. Vince is still pointing his gun.

"What I'm doing here? Why'd you sneak out in the middle of the night? Do you even know your moms was attacked tonight in her own home?" Evas face goes pale. Dom tells her what happened and that she's going to be fine. Eva toughens her face again and introduces the guys to Dom and Vince. Dom turns to Eva and sees the fear she is trying to hide.

"Are you OK?" he slowly caresses her hair, he wishes he can make her feel safe again. She slowly gives in and wraps her arms around him. Her phone begins vibrating, she jumps back and looks at the phone 'Unavailabe' her anger begins to take hold again, she knew who it was. This time she says nothing, she just holds the phone up to her ear, waiting.

"tsk, tsk, tsk, your making this way to easy for me Eva, or as you sister calls you, Eve" the last words send chills down Eva's spine. Once again she says nothing, feeling guilty of her own carelessness.

"Go to Hill Manor, by yourself, if you call the cops she's DEAD!" Blanca hangs up the phone. Eva looks at Dom with a worried face and manages to get the words out "She has her, she has Erica" Dom's jaw clenches in anger, in a low gravel voice he says "Where is she?" Eva tells them what Blanca had instructed her to do.

"Fuck that, you go there and she'll have her goons waiting for you" Vince says. Milton walks up to her and puts his hand on her shoulder, looks down at her face and repeats his words "We're your shadow remember, you won't see us, but will be there, trust me" she nods feeling a little better. Milton's guys get in their cars and Dom follows Eva to her car. Before she gets in, she turns to look at him.

"I'm sorry for leaving the way I did"

"Don't apologize, I understand why you did it"

"Should I not make it............" Dom cuts her off. "We're going home, together. I'm not leaving without you" he reaches around her back and places a 14mm caseless pistol inside her pants "Just watch yourself" he opens the door and she gets in. "Now letgo ago and get your sister", Vince pulls up and Dom gets in. The cars follow her from a distance until she reaches Hill Manor. It's a huge apartment building, it has at least 25 floors. There is a huge double glass door in the front. There is no one in the front, except a security guard. Eva stands next to her car. 'What floor is she on?' Eva tries to figure out, she turns around and reaches under her seat grabbing the Berreta and hidding it under her shirt inside her jeans. She walks towards the door and a few steps before entering, she looks back making sure the guys are near. Dom's car is visible and their eyes lock, she gives him a grin and walks in. Once inside, she goes pass the security guard and walks around the lobby, her phone rings and she picks it up.

"What next?" Eva questions.

"Get in the elevator.......... now push the top floor button." Blanca instructs her step by step. When the elevator doors close she looses range and the call hangs up. 'Damn, she knew that was going to happen' now she can't get in contact with the guysw arw are they going to know what floor she was on. She remembers her text messaging and sends Dom a message 'Top Floor'

**************************OUTSIDE***********************

Dom is figgity in his seat, his phone rings once and he looks at it 'New Text Message'..........'Top Floor' Dom gets out and signals to the guys.
They make their way to the entrance and the security guard stands up and moves infront of them.

"Where do you think you're going?" he says raising his gun in front of him. They all draw their weapons, Dom having a sawed off shotgun.

"MOVE!" Dom growls, the security guard, swallows hard and moves to the side, as Vince passes him, he pistol wips him and Milton laughs. They vacate the elevator and Dom pushes #24.

"Yo Dom, I thought she said Top Floor there's 25 floors" Milton says "Yeah and once these doors open on the 25th floor we'll be full of lead" Dom grips his shotgun tighter "So we're gonna sneak up on them from below" Vince adds.


***************************TOP FLOOR*****************************

The elevator door opens and Eva steps out to see about 6 men standing with guns on hand. One of them signals for her to follow him, he leads her to apartment #2006. Oddly enough it's the date of Leslie's death June, 20th. When they are inside, he leaves her standing in the middle of an empty room, there was plastic from wall to wall covering everything. Out from the darkness Blanca walks out, a gun in her hand, a smile on her face. She circles around Eva like a voulter.

"Did you think I wouldn't find you? That I wouldn't avenge my sisters death?" she scratches her head with the gun and laughs.

"Where's Erica?" Eva asks, standing very still.

"Where indeed" She opens a closet door and pulls Erica out, her hands are tied behind her back, her face is dirty, streaks on her cheeks where tears had fallen. Erica sees her sister and cries even more "I'm sorry Eva"

"Shhhh, It's OK, I'm here" Eva reassures her, altough she feels uncertain herself. Blanca has the gun pointed at the side of Erica's head and begins talking to her like Eva is not even in the room

"Yeah big sister is here, don't worry she's not going to do anything stupid that's going to jeopardize your life, like let's say having a gun on her" she glances back at Eva. "Put the gun on the floor slowly and kick it to me" she commands. Eva cringes but complies. She has come to the realization that she brought them both here to die.

"Good, now I'm going to give you the pleasure to see her die first" her comment directed to Eva.

"You don't want to do that" Eva usues a threatning voice. Blanca looks at Erica and back to Eva. "Yes I do, You killed my sister, I KILL YOURS!" Eva had to think of something quick, Blanca is going to snap at any minute. Before Eva can continue to stall, Erica speaks up.

"What she means is, you don't want to do that, until you know the truth" Blanca pulls her hair, jerking her head back.

"What do you mean, by the truth?" Erica has her full attention.

"Eva had nothing to do with Leslies' death. I was with Leslie on that roof top..............it was me!"


******************************************to be continued

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Maribel Santiago

***" And don't try any of that smut talk, I speak it fluently"***

- Sean Vetter
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