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bounty to claim

By: kili087
folder M through R › Pitch Black
Rating: Adult +
Chapters: 6
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Disclaimer: I do not own Pitch Black, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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and its coming together how?

Well I wrote the next chapter.



As always I don’t own Riddick and said characters except for saber and angel. Tell me what you are thinking, I am trying to keep them in character…review tell me if I am



Now on with the story







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Saber sat in the middle of the huge living room holding Angel. The little girl had yet to wake up and saber started to worry. Saber kept her cool for a little while. She looked about the room the guards had placed her in. Large spacious….dimly lit, defiantly a guys place.



The guards left most of the chains on her, which annoyed Saber to no end as she held Angel in her lap. She couldn’t really hold her so she preyed that Angel stayed on her lap. Closing her eyes she listened to the various sounds of the ship. She heard some one enter the room but made no motion to acknowledge who they were.



Riddick stared down at the brown hair beauty. He couldn’t shake the feeling that she looked so similar to his Jack-Kira. Her hair was tied up in a loose bun that laid at her shoulders. The chains about her body seem to emphasize the fact that she was a tiny little thing.

He looked at the child in her lap. He knew the shared the same blood because of the thick smell that they both shared. The little girl had short blond hair, and looked quite scruffy as if she had been in more fights than the taller replica had been.



“Who are you??” Saber asked calmly, feeling his eyes wonder over her then to Angel.



Riddick grunted at her, and moved to sit on the couch but not before getting a beer. “I should be asking you the same thing….you were on MY property after all.” He sounded as arrogant as any king would.



Saber opened her deep green eyes to stare at him, “I was visiting a grave.” She looked down at the little girl when a low moan escaped her lips, when nothing happen she started to breath again.



Riddick noticed this but said nothing, “Why was that grave important ...Ja...Kira had no family?” Saber’s head snapped up at him to glare, “that’s because fry took them away from family!”

Riddick took a swig of his beer, one eye studying her behind his goggles. “so you’re family?”



Saber narrowed her eyes in suspicion, “why are you so interested in why I was visiting a grave?” Her eyes snapped at him with fire burning in her eye’s.

Riddick let out a predatoiral laugh, “because I don’t like it when people touch what’s mine.”



Saber groaned and let her head fall forward, “So what are you going to do with me?” she closed her eyes so that she didn’t have to see him.



Riddick fell back into his cool demeanor and sighed, “Until you tell me why you were visiting the grave and desecrating it so….you shall stay here with me.”



Saber let out an audible growl at him, “Stay the hell away fron the kid then!”

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Jack stared idly at the com screen. Seemed that some one wanted to flush her out, the bounty on her head increase three fold, some one wanted her attention and they had it.



With a growl she flipped effortlessly to a standing position. “Guess it time to kill a few more people.” She walked to a fridge and yanked it open and grabbed a bottle of whiskey and headed to her room to pack a few need weapons.



Soon Jack was in her little P.O.S of a space craft. It was basic; it could get her where she needed to go when she needed. Now she was heading to the halo system.

She strapped hewer self in and grinned out into the darkness her eyes glowing eerily as darkness slowly seemed to envelope her.





“Ready or knock here I came….this time crematoria won’t save you.” She whispered as Cryo-sleep slowly took over. Her long claw like nails gripped the arm rest for a moment before relaxing with the rest of her body.













okay there you go a wonderful installment of the next chapter. If the spelling sucks I blame it on the computer cuz I did spell check. Well I am off to do ignore the homework I should be working one….and pleas review
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