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The Bitches Must Pay

By: SpikeSpiegel
folder Star Wars (All) › General
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 4
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Disclaimer: I do not own the Star Wars movie series, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Giving the Devil His Due

Ha! Ha! Ha! Last chapter! I have never had so much fun writing this Hellish hentacle story. I decided to give it a Bleach and Naruto inspired surprise! Then I must go back to Anime, I had fun causing chaos in the Star Wars Universe.

Chapter Four
Giving the Devil His Due

After the cold water bath the demons picked Lumiya up and threw her into a shallow pool of rancid water about three feet deep. The brown water contained fecal matter and waste. It smelled putrid, Lumiya wondered what was going to come next. Another gate opened and something swam out. An eyeball emerged from the depths, a Dianoga. Lumiya felt a tentacle wrap around her neck as she was lifted out of the muck. While two other tentacles wrapped around her legs and spread them apart.

"Not this again." She muttered.

The Dianoga stuck another tentacle in her mouth and she sucked it. The creature roared as it stuck the rest of it's tentacles inside her anus and vagina. The audience cheered as the creature had it's way with her and when she became half Dianoga. It lowered her into the muck and plowed into her even faster. A tear rolled down her cheek, no one felt pity for this fallen Jedi, this Sith bitch. After 30 minutes the Dianoga retreated, leaving her in the waste. More heckling and rotten food was thrown at her.

The demon ringmaster said. "The show will be ending soon, but we have a Hutt, a Hell Dragon, and the creature that harbors the most evil ever. It's our high exalted Satanic Master and his Queen Aleema. Well, she'll be watching."

Lumiya shivered, "High Exalted Satanic Master?"

The demons lifted her from the muck put a collar around her neck attached to a leash and threw her on a dais where Jabba the Hutt sat. The hutt grabbed the leash then began to lick her with his disgusting tongue, as the tip of his tail entered her ruined cunt, secreting some hot oily liquid in her. The crowds laughed and cheered. Jabba removed his tail and tongue from her and bellowed. "Dance for me you slut!" He took out a riding crop and whipped her. "Dance for me!"

Lumiya got off the dais and started dancing around like a raving idiotic retard.
The audience threw more stuff at her. "Look at the whore, she can't dance!"

After the dance recital here in Hell, she was dragged off to a Hell Dragon that ravished her to no end with a dick that was about the size of an A-Bomb. It rammed into her fast and furious, it's tongue in her mouth, then her vagina. He suckled her breasts and licked her all over.

Soon it was time for the finale, Lumiya, all filthy covered in her blood, cum, slime, semen, urine, shit, candle wax, marks from a whip, burn marks, and saliva. Her red hair was matted, green eyes that showed determination were now sad looking. Her face was bruised and she stank to high heaven a place where she'll never get to.

"Ladies and gentlemen of the underworld and the netherworld, I give you a being of pure evil. The final and last creature is Man! That great man is our unholy ruler, Exar Kun!" The evil ringmaster opened a curtain and out came Exar Kun, wearing nothing but a little black loincloth.

Exar Kun one of the oldest dark lords, he was brutal and cruel. Purest of all pure evil, not even a drop of humanity in him, just raw, beautiful, evil. Lumiya had heard of him from her backstabbing, two faced, idiotic, ignorant, fucktard of a teacher. Maybe he'll have some pity on her and maybe not.

Exar grabbed a whip, a riding crop, two long strips of fabric, not to mention a knife, a lit candle, a string with spiked balls on it, and handcuffs. He went over to Lumiya, grabbed her by the hair. "You arrogant skank, you're not worthy to be in my presence! Your existence disgusts me! It disgusts me to no end, you are really a worthless piece of shit!"

"Fuck you!" She spat.

"Don't worry bitch, we'll get to that part soon enough!" He began punching her in the face, then threw her down and whipped her all over. He handcuffed her to a pole and whipped her some more as he laughed. He grabbed the knife and slashed her breasts, her abdomen, and her ass. He took the lit candle and began burning her with it, then poured the hot wax in the wounds. "Submit to me and call me master!"

"Never!" She hissed.

Exar punched her in the stomach, kicked her in the ribs, smashed her head against the pole. The crowd roared as he inserted the balled string inside of her, then pulled it quickly out. Lumiya cried again, that's when he pimp slapped her hard across the face. He took the riding crop in his hand as he lowered her down and mounted her. He forced his engorged 12 inch dick in her bloodied, but still tight ass and rode her hard. He slapped her buttocks hard with the riding crop. "That's it, now scream for me! Submit to me and call me Master!"

"Yes Master!" Lumiya screamed hard as he assaulted her some more.

He pulled out and urinated on her, not to mention that he also shit on her too. He uncuffed her and threw her to the ground. "Get on your hands and knees! I want you to suck my dick and enjoy it! Enjoy it like you enjoyed being a demon's fuck toy!"

Lumiya nodded; "I enjoy being a demon's fuck toy master. I love being fucked by demons and having their babies. I am a worthless piece of shit, I am a whore, skank, scunt, slut, bitch, trollop, flophouse toy, bimbo, and cunt." She took Exar's dick and began sucking it, swallowing down his jiz.

Exar withdrew and kicked her to the ground. "Now it's time for an encore that you'll never forget!" He waved his hand over Lumiya and her belly began to grow large. The audience was silent as she went into labor and birthed a hideous monster. It had the claws and horns of a demon, the body of a Rancor, the tail of a Hell Dragon, the skin of a Hutt, the legs and hooves of a Wild Pig, tentacles of a Dianoga, and a head of a human man that looked a lot like Exar Kun.

Lumiya shivered in terror; "Oh shit!"

The thing turned around, unsheathed it's huge razor sharp barbed penis and started fucking her brutally. Lumiya screamed for mercy as it began to suckle her breast and nip her everywhere.

"Now that is just sickening folks." The demonic ringmaster said.

Lumiya cried and pleaded to stop this, yes, she was an immoral bitch with no regard for human life, but she had to pay! The bitch must pay! The demon hybrid was very brutal, after he finally fucked her to no end, he left the broken woman in the dirt and walked off.

The crowd gave a standing o, then departed.

A few days after, Lumiya found herself alone in a cage, Exar Kun was staring at her from the other side. "What are you going to do to me now? There is nothing left, I learned my lesson, so what are you going to do to me now, let more demons fuck me so they can impregnate me again and let their offspring impregnate me, then let the vicious cycle start all over again or maybe you'll just cut off my hands, gouge out my eyes, remove my mouth?"

"Nah, we decided that you are no longer needed, but don't worry about the demons. Aleema and the other dark women can please them, they don't mind. So we're just going to have you erased from existence." He said as he walked away and laughed. "Oh and by the way, you sucked badly last night! Worthless shit whore!

Lumiya was now a broken down whore that no one wanted. The demons got her dressed in the finest silks. She was now back in the arena. There was a big crowd, "This is a present from the author!"

"I am avenging Mara Jade Skywalker! The Hottie of Star Wars!" The woman in white reveals herself as Kate Spiegel dressed as Orochimaru, the psycho Steve Blum Fan grabbed a Kunai knife and threw it into Lumiya's face. Then she unsheathed the Kusanagi Sword and plunged into Lumiya's chest.

The woman vanished in a puff of smoke. "Now a final gift from Mara Jade Skywalker, Jedi and Soul Reaper Apprentice! Release the Hollow!" Exar Kun shouted.

"Bye you ungrateful slut! That's what you get for fucking around with me, Hobag!" Mara Jade Skywalker blew a raspberry at Lumiya and gave her the bird before she flew back to Soul Society.

Lumiya looked up at the sky and saw a pair of white hands open it wide. Suddenly, she saw the black monster with the white mask hover over her. It grabbed her and swallowed her whole, the crowd cheered once more.

Well, payment's a bitch, ain't it.

Now it's Jacen Solo's turn! Bring him in! One more jerkoff that I loathe to torture and kill!

That's it! Stick a fork in it, it's done! Thanks everybody! Love and Hisses, Kate Spiegel! Wait! There will be one more before I finish my reign of Chaos in the SWU! I want to get my hands on Jacen now!
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