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An Eye for an Eye, A Kiss for a Kiss

By: AddictedToJack
folder Pirates of the Caribbean (All) › Het - Male/Female › Jack/Elizabeth
Rating: Adult +
Chapters: 17
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"A Little Misunderstanding"

Author's Notes:

Hey!!! Thanks to everybody for all your wonderful reviews!!!

I'm so sorry for the terrible delay! *shame on me* But I finally finished this chapter.I also publish this fic on ff.net , but this version is steamier than the one on ff. ^^

I'd be grateful if your review!!!

Here's the new chappie...MY FIRST SMUT EVER!!! Enjoy!


CHAPTER 4 "A little misunderstanding"



Elizabeth was leaning her back against the palm tree, her limp legs nearly failing to carry her weight. She was out of breath, her eyes covered with heavy lids, desire pulsing in her veins. And then, Jack's wonderful warmth suddenly disappeared.

"Sorry....got carried away....whelp's territory..." His words echoed in her head, and she came round instantly, realizing what had happened.
Despite the drowsiness that had come over her, her eyes snapped open to see Jack walking away, and she rushed after him on wobbly legs.

"Jack...? Wait!!! "

She caught up with him quickly and embraced him tightly from behind, unwilling to let him make a single step forward.

"I only asked you not to stop, silly you..." she whispered into his ear, and began planting soft but hungry kisses on his shoulder, clinging to his body, sliding her palms across his handsome chest.

"Don't you ever stop, Jack. I need you ..."

Jack closed his eyes and swallowed. All of a sudden, his deep disappointment vanished without a trace, replaced by the blatant need building in his body. Despite all this, he chose not to react, and stood there still and quiet, attentively listening to her tender words, deeply enjoying her sweet caresses.

"Don't refuse me, Jack. Don't make me beg..." she continued between her kisses "Give me what I've been dreaming of for so long. Something that Will has never given to me..."

He smiled inwardly,in his thoughts briefly returning to the day of his first encounter with the whelp in the Port Royal's smithy .
"I knew it! I've seen him through, the very first moment I've sighted this eunuch, that calls himself a man!"

"I'm not his territory, Jack. He'd neither kissed me, nor he'd ever touched me the way you just did, not to talk of- " she paused blushing.

It was damn hard for Jack to believe it was real. Or was it just his wild imagination playing its dirty tricks on him? He felt as if he was lost in one of his crazy fantasies again.

"Jack! Are you even listening ?"

She didn't realize how her confession made Jack burn inside, until he turned round to face her. His nearly black eyes smoldered with lust and fire, making him look all the more alluring.

"A truly wicked temptress you are," he hissed "Why didn't you express yourself that clearly before, eh?"

Lizzie's eyes came to rest on his lips. She expected them to crash upon hers in a demanding kiss, but Jack was teasing her instead. He was playing with her lips, brushing them fleetingly with his own, nipping them gently; virtually driving her out of her mind. The feeling of his hands slipping under the fabric of her shirt caused series of shivers run down her spine; yet, he was barely touching her skin. Even in her dreams she wouldn't have suspected, that this rogue, this pirate could touch her in the softest of ways.

After a long while, his hungry eyes met her glassy gaze - a wordless plea for more... He claimed her mouth in a fierce kiss, making her moan in reply. She was running her fingers through his dreadlocks, drawing him closer, inhaling the unique scent of his skin. His scent intoxicated her everytime he was around her.Jack was making her feel what no other man had ever made her feel. Waves of overwhelming heat were passing through her body, causing her heart to make hundreds of "thump-thumps" a minute - or maybe she only felt this way...?

"Just in case, missy..." he parted from her lips briefly "Let me warn you that from now on, there will be no stopping, no matter what you say or do...Count on that..." he whispered huskily.

Jack desired her for too long, and intended not to waste one single minute of their short stay on the island. Unfortunately, Lizzie's shirt didn't allow him to explore her further and he was dying to attend to her petite,round breasts . He kissed her again with renewed fervor, while his hands kept on fighting with the stubborn buttons. Struggling hard to unbutton her shirt, at the same time eagerly tasting the sweetness of her lips, he staggered making them lose their balance and fall on the soft grass.

"Bugger...damn, useless,disturbing buttons !" he growled ,as his patience was about to run out.

To his surprise , Lizzie was giggling at his lack of patience. He, however, didn't see anything funny in the fact that said buttons were still standing in his way to undress her.
"To hell with all of you! " he growled, tearing them off with his teeth, one after another.

"Jack! What are you doing?"

"Everything but stopping, luv. And make sure you never ask this damn question again."

"I mean the buttons!" she gasped

"You don't need them anyway.Told you before it should be a dress or nothing..." he reminded her while pulling her shirt.Stunned with the sight of half naked Lizzie laying underneath him, he smiled seductively.

"Well, nothing is decidedly the better option..."

Her face blushed deep crimson when her shirt was ripped from her body, her round shapes exposed to a man for the first time in her life.

"You don't feel comfy like that, 'Lizbeth? No need to be shy. It's just you and dear ol' Jack..." he winked at her, flashing her a golden grin.

"They are so small...You must be disappointed..."

"Lizzie, are you out of your mind? I love them .So firm,so sweet, just like I had imagined...Simply luscious,darling."

She moaned, as his palm cupped one of her breasts,covering it totally. "And they fit like they were especially designed for me hands..."

Her soft ,smooth skin immediately changed into goose bumps in reaction to his tender touch.

"A perfect fit. Don't you think, luv?"

"Ohhh...touch me, Jack..."

He fulfilled her wish with pleasure .He kissed her deep and hard, his fingers brushing her breasts one by one,teasing her pink nipples with his clever fingers.He broke the kiss and gave her a smirk as he lowered his mouth to the humble but enthralling mounds of her breasts.He used his tongue to stimulate her further ,getting her aroused like never before.Jack was licking one of her taut nipples,and when she whispered his name in delight,he took care of the other one.Sucking it eagerly , he was looking straight into her sultry eyes.She could hardly contain the desire that filled her.

He was pressing open mouthed kisses against the sensitive skin of her throat, his tongue slowly moving down her body,making her tremble in bliss and anticipation. Feeling the wet heat between her thighs growing in strength,she reached for the belts of his breeches.His breathing quickened when she struggled to open them with her shaky hands.

"No more shy, Lizzie? How did that happen,I wonder?"

To Jack's amusement, it was quite a long battle.She'd won it eventually,tossing both belts away,and a triumphant smile appeared on her face. But then she remembered that there was still a sash...

"Dear God! " she rolled her eyes in annoyance "What in the world makes you wear all of them?One would do!"

"So eager?" he grinned devilishly ,noticing how desperate she was to get rid of the disturbing stuff. Instead of helping her to deal with his sash,he quickly managed to open her own breeches and pull them off her swiftly.

"You are a goddess,Lizzie..." he whispered; his hungry eyes devouring her body deliciously illuminated by the flames of bonfire.

"Mine at last...God, I'd wanted to see you like this for ages now...Naked and hot ,laying underneath me-"

"Ready for you... "she added unexpectedly.

This was too much for Jack ,and he needed to free his throbbing erection from his breeches at once. Lizzie drew his face closer to meet his lips with hers ,wrapping her arms tightly around his neck.He took her breath away,kissing her in abandon, while using one hand to unfasten his sash. To his satisfaction ,he was able to undress himself almost completely,without breaking the kiss. After getting rid of his breeches ,he covered her body with his completely,and they were struck by the incredible skin-on-skin sensation. Fresh wave of lust hit their bodies,turning their kisses even more aggressive. Seeing Lizzie gasping for air, Jack shifted his lips to her collar bone, sucking and nipping her delicate flesh,leaving marks on her neck for everyone to see. His right hand was slowly making its way down her belly,before finally reaching her inner thigh. He was touching the area teasingly,making her feel the world spin. She was burning by his doing, and felt a sudden urge to touch what she couldn't see. Sneaking her palm between their heated bodies ,she encountered something that made her eyes widen in surprise.Wrapping her hand around it, she was shocked by its size.

"Lizzie..." he moaned, trembling under her touch "I see you've found the little pirate..."

"Little? Jack, are you mad? It's...it's too big!"

"Let's not exaggerate,Lizzie. " he smirked noticing that her face suddenly went pale " You may assume so due to your lack of comparison. But in fact, it's only substantial, that's all."

"For your information Jack, I've had more than enough of said comparison!"

"Now that's interesting..." he frowned,visibly taken aback "You don't make an impression of a lass who sleeps around."

"How dare you insinuate that!" she huffed; seriously offended

"I...I've never..." she stammered nervously "I was merely a secret observer. And...and nothing more than that!"

"What a naughty lass you are,Miss Swann. Might I ask what exactly you’d observed?"

"At the residence, I'd seen our servants, including our gardener, our butler and four of our maids sneaking into the kitchen at late night hours.I'd observed their secret trysts."

"So instead of sleeping like a good girl, you were staring at the servants' goods,eh? Watching them shag maids on the kitchen table? Oh, how much I like that wanton streak in you, Lizzie..."

"Wanton?" she exclaimed in surprise "It was merely a coincidental observation! I woke up after midnight and I needed a glass of water, so I went down to the kitchen completely unaware that it was occupied by our butler and my chambermaid!"

"The first time may have been coincidental. I'll buy that." he smiled amused. "Later, however, you intentionally kept on hiding in the kitchen and peeping. Didn't you?"

"And why not? Since no one ever cared to inform me about the differences between a man and a woman's anatomy, I took the matter into my hands.And thanks to my initiative,I know it's not substantial. It's way too big!" she stated trying to stand up, but he pressed her down onto the grass,trapping her body under his.

"Alright," he sighed with resignation "I admit it's hugeish. But once I'm inside you, you will appreciate the size." he said in his low voice and kissed her pulsing throat.

"I'll rather die of pain."

"Take it easy, luv. It hurts a bit at first, but there's no way to avoid it."

"No, we can't-"

"I promise you will not be disappointed" he was trying to convince her ,nipping at her left breast and sucking it into his mouth .

"I...I can't even imagine-" he cut her off kissing her demandingly.

"I see you need a lil' bit of persuasion.But not to worry luv, I can easily take care of that.”

"We need to stop!"

"That's out of the question, luv."

"Jack, you don't understand..."

Suddenly she couldn't remember anymore what she was trying to say.She felt his pulsing hardness pressing against her wetness and she was nearly losing control.The feeling increased when Jack started rubbing himself against her center.His impressive length awakened her tiny pearl, and begged for entry. As if it were not enough of a persuasion, Jack played with her lips,stealing short, heated kisses,before attacking her tongue with his.He was savouring the taste of her hungry lips and the exquisite closeness of her glorious body, that seemed to be speaking its own language,screaming for him,begging to be taken.

"Should I stop? Hmm?" he asked , looking at her with his squinted eyes.

"No!" she moaned and closed her eyes, helplessly getting lost in passion.

"Good, for I don't intend to.There will be no stopping, my dear." Sucking, and gently biting the flesh of her right nipple, he felt her body tense,her fingernails drawing bloody marks on his back.She began rocking her body with his, keeping his rhythm to increase the addicting friction between them. Immersing deeper and deeper in their fiery trance,she arched her back calling his name and all of a sudden he was inside her. Just an inch of him, and she wanted more.She realized that she needed the whole of him, no matter the pain...

"Trust me." he entered her in one thrust, stretching her beyond degrees and filling her to the limit .She inhaled sharply,closing her arms around him,crying out in stabbing pain.

"I'll make it up to you, I promise..." she heard him whisper soothingly into her ear. He didn't move at first, not only to spare her further pain, but to postpone his release. He was dangerously close,struggling desperately to regain control over his trembling body.

"If I disappoint her now,I'll never forgive myself." he thought

It was nearly a miracle, that he managed to hold back, considering how long he's desired her, how obsessively he needed her,nearly losing his mind.Not to mention the fact, that it's been ages,or seven months to be exact,since he's last been with a woman.

Lizzie's tears were slowly drying on her rosy cheeks, and she was calming down thanks to Jack's tender whispers and sweet kisses he was planting all over her face.The pain finally subsided and he started moving intuitively. It was the headiest of feelings to be filling her so completely, so divinely good to be moving within her,claiming her as his own, savoring every second of their joining. She welcomed him chanting his name repeatedly,as she was climbing higher and higher.

"Harder,Jack..."

He didn't expect her to ask for it. Not after she had been so afraid of pain.

"Not this time ,luv. I don't want to hurt you even more."

"I want it. Take me hard. " she pleaded "Like you did in my fantasies..."

"So she was daydreaming of me pounding into her...Was she touching herself while thinking of me?" That thought took him higher,and he couldn't resist but to give her what she wanted so badly.

"Even our fantasies are very much alike, I see..." he admitted with the first hard plunge,eliciting a loud scream from her.

"So, Lizzie... Didn't I tell you, you would like the size?"

Her breathless screams in his ears, and her nails tearing the skin of his tattooed back served him as an answer.

"We fit like a hand in a glove, don't you feel it? A damn tight glove..."

"You feel so good Jack...I want it to last forever..." her words came in gasps, her body trembling as violently as his, and he knew it wouldn't last much longer.

Her body was reacting with massive shudders to his every stroke, her legs wrapped tightly around his body, hands reaching blindly for his hair,drawing his dreadlocks in passion.Suddenly he noticed tears dropping from the corners of her eyes, and he remembered the "good friend" whelp again.

"The eunuch would have bloody stopped now,seeing her tears. Well, assuming that he wouldn't have finished before he had even started." He couldn't help but to smile at the thought.

She was about to experience her first climax, and he knew that his own was overdue. She arched to get him deeper inside her ,her inner muscles starting to spasm around him, making him experience unknown heights.

"Good girl..." he said huskily "Come for me, Lizzie."

His words pushed her over the edge, and she came hard, unconsciously biting his shoulder and making him hiss in pain. He had no choice but to follow her, knowing that his body couldn't take the tension any longer. He gripped her hips tightly with his last,deepest thrusts ,groaning madly and shaking without control.

"Lizzie!" he gasped,spilling himself into her, feeling her tightening around him once again,as she surprised him with yet another orgasm of hers.He could see her eyes roll back as she came even more intense, with his name barely audible on her lips.

Panting heavily, he lay his head on her heaving chest, dizzy and drunk with happiness. Minutes later when their hearts found their normal rhythm,he raised his heavy head to meet her radiant gaze; her sensuous lips twisted in the sweetest of smiles telling him that she's been more than satisfied.

"Died of pain, eh?" he asked with a smirk

"Drowned in the ocean of bliss, Jack." she answered cupping his face with her still trembling hand "And I want to drown with you again."

"Well, the night is young, and I'm more than willing to drown with you, Lizzie." he softly kissed her swollen lips "Over and over again..."

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